Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, I make at least before I shopping in order to remind me not forgetting. Necessary items and avoid buying only three items.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work. I wrote down all the things I need to do in and. It make my life more organized.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Maybe they have a sharp bring. That you can always remember all the things that the. And the master to do.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer my phone. Becauses I can take my phone to everywhere. And I won't lost my phone so I can check my list in and everywhere every time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且内容不够具体。建议注意时态和句子结构,避免重复和不完整的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember the necessary items and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,句子不完整,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子,并适当使用连接词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. I write down all the tasks I need to complete, which helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,语法错误严重,表达混乱。建议先明确观点,再用完整句子表达原因,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: Some people might not like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember tasks mentally instead of writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误,句子结构不完整。建议注意语法和拼写,使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can check my list anytime and anywhere without worrying about losing it.
× Yes I do, I make at least before I shopping in order to remind me not forgetting.
✓ Yes I do, I make at least before I shop in order to remind me not to forget.
这里的动词形式错误,'shopping' 应该用动词原形 'shop',因为前面有助动词 'do',后面跟动词原形。并且 'not forgetting' 应改为 'not to forget',因为这里需要不定式来表达目的。
× Necessary items and avoid buying only three items.
✓ I list necessary items and avoid buying only three items.
原句缺少主语和谓语,导致句子结构不完整。需要补充主语和谓语使句子完整。
× I wrote down all the things I need to do in and.
✓ I write down all the things I need to do in it.
这里时态不一致,前面是现在时态,后面用过去式 'wrote' 不合适,应统一用现在时态 'write'。另外,句尾 'in and' 应为 'in it'。
× It make my life more organized.
✓ It makes my life more organized.
主语是单数 'It',谓语动词应加 -s,变为 'makes',以符合主谓一致。
× Maybe they have a sharp bring.
✓ Maybe they have a sharp brain.
单词拼写错误,'bring' 应为 'brain',且句子结构正确。
× That you can always remember all the things that the.
✓ That you can always remember all the things.
句子不完整,末尾多余 'that the',应删除使句子完整。
× And the master to do.
✓ And master to do it.
句子不完整且缺少主语,建议改为 'And master to do it.' 或更完整表达。
× I prefer my phone. Becauses I can take my phone to everywhere.
✓ I prefer my phone because I can take my phone everywhere.
'to everywhere' 中 'to' 不需要,'everywhere' 本身表示地点,直接用即可。
× And I won't lost my phone so I can check my list in and everywhere every time.
✓ And I won't lose my phone so I can check my list anywhere anytime.
'won't lost' 中 'lost' 应为动词原形 'lose',因为 'won't' 后面跟动词原形。'in and everywhere every time' 结构混乱,改为 'anywhere anytime' 更自然。