List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like 'I always forgot' (should be 'I always forget'). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items easily. Therefore, carrying a list helps me remember everything I need when I go out.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and more natural phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly, and avoid awkward expressions such as 'every while' and 'way more easier'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me complete tasks step by step. This way, I can organize my thoughts and follow the rules more easily.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use specific reasons. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Some people find making lists boring because it feels like a tedious daily chore, such as grocery shopping. This lack of interest makes them avoid writing lists.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammar mistakes. Try to clarify your points and use correct verb tenses. Also, explain why phone lists are helpful with specific details.

Ví dụ: I usually make lists on my phone because it sends me notifications to remind me of important tasks. This helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting anything.

× I always forgot about the things that I wanted to buy.

✓ I always forget about the things that I want to buy.

The sentence is about a habitual action, so the present simple tense 'forget' should be used instead of the past tense 'forgot'. Also, 'wanted' should be 'want' to maintain present tense consistency.

× So it is really necessary for me to carry at least with myself when I'm going out for shopping.

✓ So it is really necessary for me to carry it with me when I'm going out shopping.

The phrase 'carry at least with myself' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'with me' and 'carry it' refers to the list. Also, 'going out for shopping' should be 'going out shopping' for natural phrasing.

× And every while I'm writing down a list for my work, it is a way more easier to collect my thoughts on it.

✓ And whenever I'm writing down a list for my work, it is much easier to collect my thoughts on it.

'Every while' is incorrect; 'whenever' is appropriate. 'A way more easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is the correct comparative adverb phrase. Also, 'on it' is acceptable but could be omitted for clarity.

× Writing down a list could be boring rather than a writing down some daily of worked every do.

✓ Writing down a list could be more boring than writing down some daily work to do.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word choice. 'Rather than a writing down some daily of worked every do' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper comparative structure and clearer wording.

× And they are super extremely boring, like going out for buying grocery.

✓ And they are extremely boring, like going out to buy groceries.

'Super extremely' is redundant; 'extremely' alone suffices. 'Going out for buying grocery' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going out to buy groceries' with the plural form 'groceries'.

× I usually do it on my phone because there isn't always a notification that my phone send me and remind me there are stuff that I really needed to do an Ivan go.

✓ I usually do it on my phone because there isn't always a notification that my phone sends me to remind me there are things that I really need to do and I can go.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'there isn't always a notification' is acceptable but the following clause needs correction. 'My phone send me' should be 'my phone sends me' (third person singular). 'There are stuff' should be 'there are things' because 'stuff' is uncountable and does not take 'are'. 'I really needed' should be 'I really need' to maintain present tense. 'An Ivan go' is unclear; likely intended 'and I can go'.