Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list when I go to shopping because I think it can help me keep my mind clear day and don't. And don't forget by some important items.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually do some light stuff for my work. I think is. It can improve my informations and I can. I can't achievement my task on time.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
And they might think make a list. Well, last time and if you. Make some list ING paper. It is very easy loose. Losing. So people usually don't like make lit lists.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Actually I prepared make a list on phone becauses. If. Right in paper. It is a two loss age, but if I use for. It can keep. Around mine and. Conveni.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复和错误用词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember important items and stay organized.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达,建议使用完整句子,明确说明做清单的目的和效果,并使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me organize information and complete my tasks on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱,语法错误较多,建议用简洁的句子说明原因,并注意时态和词形变化。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because paper lists can be easily lost, which makes them feel it's not useful.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有语法错误,建议用完整句子表达偏好,并说明原因,使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I won't lose them like paper lists.
× Yes, I always make a list when I go to shopping because I think it can help me keep my mind clear day and don't.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I think it can help me keep my mind clear all day and not forget.
动词go后面接动名词形式,正确表达是go shopping,而不是go to shopping。
× And don't forget by some important items.
✓ And not forget to buy some important items.
动词forget后面应接不定式to buy,表示“不要忘记去买”,而不是用by。
× Yes, I usually do some light stuff for my work. I think is.
✓ Yes, I usually do some light tasks for my work. I think it is helpful.
句子缺少主语和谓语,导致结构不完整,需要补充完整句子。
× I can. I can't achievement my task on time.
✓ I can achieve my tasks on time.
achievement是名词,句中应使用动词achieve,且tasks应为复数以匹配上下文。
× And they might think make a list.
✓ And they might think making a list is unnecessary.
动词think后接动名词making表示“认为做某事”,而不是直接用动词原形。
× Well, last time and if you. Make some list ING paper.
✓ Well, last time, if you make a list on paper,
动词make后面不接动名词,且介词应为on paper。
× It is very easy loose. Losing.
✓ It is very easy to lose.
形容词easy后应接不定式to lose,而不是动名词losing。
× So people usually don't like make lit lists.
✓ So people usually don't like making lists.
动词like后应接动名词making,而不是动词原形make。
× Actually I prepared make a list on phone becauses.
✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because
动词prefer后接不定式to make,prepared用法错误。
× If. Right in paper. It is a two loss age,
✓ If I write on paper, it is easy to lose,
动词write后接介词on paper,且表达“容易丢失”应为easy to lose。
× but if I use for. It can keep. Around mine and. Conveni.
✓ but if I use my phone, it can help me keep things around me and is convenient.
代词使用错误,mine应为me,conveni应为convenient,且句子需补充完整。