Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make list when I shop. I like shopping freely and I always remember what I need and I depends on the discount so I don't.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Oh no I do not make this year when I work I think it is makes me feel stressed so I usually doing work. Am I keeping track of my hand and I like more flexible when with my work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people may think of making listowel spend a lot of time, so they prefer to remember all the tasks by they hate, or they may think the lesser will make them feel stressful. So that's why some people don't like make list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer make list on my phone because the phone is always by my side and I can easily use the app to organize the plane and if I need I can assure to my friends easily and I can put the. Links and the photos on the odd.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“depends”应为“depend”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议在回答时使用完整句子,避免语法错误,并且适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to shop freely. I usually remember what I need, and I also depend on discounts to decide what to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,且缺乏逻辑连贯性。建议先明确回答问题,然后用简洁的句子说明原因,避免使用错误的时态和词汇。
Ví dụ: No, I don't make a list for my work because it makes me feel stressed. I prefer to work flexibly and keep track of my tasks in my own way.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“listowel”应为“lists will”,句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点,并用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. Also, they may feel stressed by seeing many tasks written down, so they prefer to remember tasks mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,如“assure”应为“share”,“plane”应为“plan”,句子不连贯。建议注意词汇准确性,使用完整句子,并合理使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. I can easily use apps to organize my plans, share them with friends, and add links or photos if needed.
× No, I don't make list when I shop.
✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop.
这里的“list”是可数名词,单数形式时需要加冠词“a”。
× I depends on the discount so I don't.
✓ I depend on the discount so I don't.
主语“I”是第一人称单数,动词应使用原形“depend”,而不是第三人称单数形式“depends”。
× Oh no I do not make this year when I work I think it is makes me feel stressed so I usually doing work.
✓ Oh no, I do not make a list when I work. I think it makes me feel stressed, so I usually just do my work.
“make this year”应为“make a list”,且“make”后面需要宾语。动词“makes”应与主语“it”一致。动词“doing”应改为“do”以符合句子结构。
× so I usually doing work.
✓ so I usually do work.
“usually”后面应接动词原形“do”,而不是动名词“doing”。
× Am I keeping track of my hand and I like more flexible when with my work.
✓ I keep track of my tasks and I like to be more flexible with my work.
“Am I keeping”不符合语境,应为陈述句“I keep”。“my hand”应为“my tasks”或类似表达。句子结构混乱,需调整使表达清晰。
× Some people may think of making listowel spend a lot of time, so they prefer to remember all the tasks by they hate, or they may think the lesser will make them feel stressful.
✓ Some people may think that making lists will take a lot of time, so they prefer to remember all the tasks by heart, or they may think that lists will make them feel stressed.
“making listowel”应为“making lists will”,“by they hate”应为“by heart”,“the lesser”用法错误,应为“lists”。
× So that's why some people don't like make list.
✓ So that's why some people don't like to make lists.
“make list”应为“make lists”,且动词后需加不定式“to make”。
× I prefer make list on my phone because the phone is always by my side and I can easily use the app to organize the plane and if I need I can assure to my friends easily and I can put the. Links and the photos on the odd.
✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because the phone is always by my side and I can easily use the app to organize the plan, and if I need, I can share it with my friends easily, and I can put the links and the photos on the app.
“prefer make list”应为“prefer to make lists”。“organize the plane”应为“organize the plan”。“assure to my friends”应为“share it with my friends”。“on the odd”应为“on the app”。