Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Just I make a list when I stuff it hurts me. Remember what I need to buy and keep me from spending too much money. Actually write it down on paper before I go.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Just I make a list for my work, it helps me stay organized and focus on what I need to do. As you are digital that Remember Me. About my test and I feel good when I can check things off.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because some people like to be your Facebook and Turn 1 to be titled by a list. They enjoy doing things as a thing of them which make them feel fish.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making list. On paper, because I like the feeling or writing things down, it easier for me to remember things that way. And uh, inside forcing things are the list when I done.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. I prefer writing the list on paper because it is easier to check items off.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và liên kết ý rõ ràng. Hãy tránh những câu không hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I usually use a digital app to keep track, and I feel satisfied when I can check off completed tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa bị mất. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Tránh sử dụng những cụm từ không đúng ngữ cảnh hoặc không có nghĩa.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. They enjoy doing things in their own way, which makes them feel more free and relaxed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng và tránh những từ không phù hợp. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down. It is easier for me to remember tasks that way, and I enjoy crossing off items when I finish them.
× Just I make a list when I stuff it hurts me.
✓ I just make a list when I feel overwhelmed.
The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear meaning. 'Just I make a list' should be 'I just make a list' to follow correct English word order. 'when I stuff it hurts me' is unclear and likely a misuse of words; replacing it with 'when I feel overwhelmed' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.
× Remember what I need to buy and keep me from spending too much money.
✓ It helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.
The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. Adding 'It helps me' clarifies the subject, and 'keeps' agrees with the singular subject 'It'. This correction improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Actually write it down on paper before I go.
✓ I actually write it down on paper before I go.
The original sentence is missing the subject 'I'. Including the subject makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.
× Just I make a list for my work, it helps me stay organized and focus on what I need to do.
✓ I just make a list for my work; it helps me stay organized and focus on what I need to do.
The phrase 'Just I make a list' has incorrect word order; it should be 'I just make a list'. Also, the comma should be replaced with a semicolon to properly connect two independent clauses.
× As you are digital that Remember Me.
✓ I use a digital app called Remember Me.
The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Rewriting it to specify the use of a digital app clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× About my test and I feel good when I can check things off.
✓ It helps me with my tasks, and I feel good when I can check things off.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding a subject and connecting the ideas properly makes the sentence complete and understandable.
× Because some people like to be your Facebook and Turn 1 to be titled by a list.
✓ Because some people don't like to be restricted by a list.
The original sentence is confusing and contains incorrect phrases. Rewriting it to express the intended meaning clearly corrects the sentence.
× They enjoy doing things as a thing of them which make them feel fish.
✓ They enjoy doing things their own way, which makes them feel free.
The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure. Replacing 'as a thing of them' with 'their own way' and 'fish' with 'free' corrects the meaning and grammar.
× I prefer making list.
✓ I prefer making lists.
The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the general preference expressed. This is a singular and plural issue.
× On paper, because I like the feeling or writing things down, it easier for me to remember things that way.
✓ On paper, because I like the feeling of writing things down; it's easier for me to remember things that way.
The original sentence has a typo 'or' instead of 'of' and is a run-on sentence. Correcting the preposition and splitting into two clauses with proper punctuation improves clarity and grammar.
× And uh, inside forcing things are the list when I done.
✓ And, uh, I find it satisfying to cross things off the list when I'm done.
The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Rewriting it to express the intended meaning clearly and correctly improves comprehension.