List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“wanna”应避免口语化，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免口语缩写，并且回答时保持连贯，避免断句。

Ví dụ: Sometimes I make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget important items. However, most of the time, I just browse the supermarket and buy whatever I need.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子不完整且有拼写错误。建议练习使用正确的时态和句子结构，确保表达清楚且连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think making a list at work is very helpful because it helps me keep track of tasks I haven't completed yet and ensures nothing is forgotten.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“make a list is”应为“making a list is”，且“brand brained”表达不清。建议使用正确的动名词形式和准确表达观点。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time, or they have a good memory and can remember all their tasks without writing them down.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误和语法错误，如“Mikolas”应为“making lists”，句子结构混乱。建议注意拼写和句子连贯性，表达时保持简洁明了。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Since I have a poor memory, I often lose paper lists, but my phone is always with me.

× Sometimes I will make a list when I shop because I wanna make sure I won't forget those things I must to buy it and.

✓ Sometimes I will make a list when I shop because I want to make sure I won't forget those things I must buy.

这里“wanna”是口语缩写，应改为正式的“want to”。“must to buy”中“must”后不加“to”，应直接用动词原形“buy”。此外，“it and”多余，应删除。

× But most of the time I just. Gay looking in the supermarket and buy whatever I want.

✓ But most of the time I just go looking in the supermarket and buy whatever I want.

句子结构不完整，“Gay looking”应为“go looking”，表示去超市逛逛。

× Yeah, I think make a list when you work is really helpful because.

✓ Yeah, I think making a list when you work is really helpful because.

动词“make”应改为动名词“making”作主语。

× A list can help you to be more clearly about which job you haven't done yet an.

✓ A list can help you to be clearer about which job you haven't done yet.

“more clearly”应改为形容词比较级“clearer”，因为这里修饰的是“be”，需要形容词。

× To make sure those die Latins that lens and.

✓ To make sure those deadlines that last and.

原句不完整且词语错误，应为“deadlines”，但句子仍不完整，建议补充完整句子。

× In my opinion those people probably just think make a list is really time consuming.

✓ In my opinion, those people probably just think making a list is really time consuming.

“make a list”应改为动名词“making a list”作主语。

× Or they just got a great memory so they can remember all those jobs, words, tasks to in their brand. Brained.

✓ Or they just have a great memory so they can remember all those jobs, words, tasks in their brain.

“got”应改为“have”表示拥有；“to in their brand. Brained”是错误拼写，应为“in their brain”。

× I prefer Mikolas on my phone because there will be more convenient than read it down on the paper because I don't have a great memory so I always lost things.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than writing them down on paper since I don't have a great memory and always lose things.

“Mikolas”应为“making lists”；“there will be more convenient”应改为“it is more convenient”；“read it down”应为“writing them down”；“lost”应为“lose”。

× If I ready on on the paper I had probably just forget where I put it, so I prefer.

✓ If I read it on paper, I would probably just forget where I put it, so I prefer.

“ready on on the paper”应为“read it on paper”；“had probably”应为“would probably”；“forget”应用动词原形。

× Make less on my phone.

✓ Making lists on my phone.

“Make less”应为“Making lists”，且句子不完整，应补充完整。