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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Sometimes if I got something that I must buy it and I'm afraid that I would forget. So I will make a list to make sure that I will remember it.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

It work. I think megaglest in work is. Really important because it can help you to make. More clear that if there anything you haven't done yet an it. To make sure what's the die lying about those things and to check. If there is something, you already done it.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think probably because that they think making a list is time consuming and they prefer to use her brain. Remember those things. Naturally and. Probably they got a great memory so they won't forget those things they need to do.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer make alerts on my phone because there would be more convenient than writing down on the paper. Of course, sometimes you will forget where you left the paper. Yes, and you probably. Will make the paper dirty or something so that you can't see what you write.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的时态和句式,避免重复表达,并使句子更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list when I need to buy important items and worry that I might forget them.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,缺乏连贯性。建议练习使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, making a list at work is very important because it helps me keep track of tasks I haven't completed and ensures nothing is overlooked.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的代词和句子结构,避免断句过短,增强表达的连贯性。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory, especially if they have a good one.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但存在语法错误和句子断裂。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性,使用连词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer to set reminders on my phone because it's more convenient than writing on paper, which can be easily lost or damaged.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Sometimes if I got something that I must buy it and I'm afraid that I would forget.

Sometimes if I get something that I must buy and I'm afraid that I would forget.

这里使用了过去时态“got”,但句子描述的是一般现在时的习惯行为,应该用一般现在时“get”。

Sentence structure errors

× So I will make a list to make sure that I will remember it.

So I will make a list to make sure that I remember it.

句子中“will remember”不符合从句中一般现在时的用法,应该用一般现在时“remember”。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× It work.

It works.

主语是第三人称单数“it”,谓语动词应加-s,变为“works”。

Sentence structure errors

× I think megaglest in work is. Really important because it can help you to make.

I think making lists at work is really important because it can help you.

原句结构混乱,单词拼写错误,应调整为完整且通顺的句子。

Sentence structure errors

× More clear that if there anything you haven't done yet an it.

It makes things clearer, so you know if there is anything you haven't done yet.

原句不完整且语法混乱,应重组句子使其表达清晰。

Sentence structure errors

× To make sure what's the die lying about those things and to check.

To make sure what's the deadline for those things and to check.

原句中“die lying”拼写错误,应为“deadline”,且句子结构需调整。

Sentence structure errors

× If there is something, you already done it.

If there is something, you have already done it.

时态错误,完成时态应使用“have done”。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× It work.

It works.

同上,主语为第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× because that they think making a list is time consuming and they prefer to use her brain.

because they think making a list is time consuming and they prefer to use their brain.

代词“her”与主语“they”不一致,应使用“their”。

Sentence structure errors

× Remember those things. Naturally and.

Remember those things naturally.

句子断裂,应合并为完整句子。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Probably they got a great memory so they won't forget those things they need to do.

Probably they have a great memory so they won't forget those things they need to do.

“got”为过去时,描述现在情况应使用“have”。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I prefer make alerts on my phone because there would be more convenient than writing down on the paper.

I prefer to make alerts on my phone because it is more convenient than writing on paper.

“more convenient”前应有主语“it”,且“writing down on the paper”表达不当,应为“writing on paper”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Sometimes you will forget where you left the paper.

Sometimes you forget where you left the paper.

这里时态应与上下文一致,使用一般现在时“forget”。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, and you probably. Will make the paper dirty or something so that you can't see what you write.

Yes, and you probably will make the paper dirty or something so that you can't see what you wrote.

句子断裂且时态不一致,应合并并调整时态。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AfraidFrightened; Reluctant
ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
DirtySoiled; Indecent; Dishonest; Despicable; Malevolent
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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