Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
I don't like make him otherwise because I already showed him on light. For example, I already or yours are sharp. I see a good goods. I I will.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I already I already too making working tables be 'cause I'm on doesn't teacher. For example I already are making dancing on. Take table team to teach students.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I don't like making levels because I think it can get me a lot of price. For example I can I can follow the table time to to do. On some things, but I don't like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Anna cues on my phone because I think it is a convenience that is that yours making my phone for example, I already can watching table lives on my phone, so I think it's a very convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,语法和表达存在较多错误,导致意思难以理解。建议练习简单句型,直接回答问题,并用具体例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. For example, if I see good products, I will buy them immediately.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,语法错误严重,缺乏逻辑。建议先明确回答问题,然后用简单句子说明原因或举例。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because I am a teacher. For example, I prepare lesson plans and schedules to teach my students effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯,表达不清楚。建议用简单句表达观点,并用具体原因或例子支持。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. For example, they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a schedule.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不流畅,语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题,说明理由,并用具体例子支持。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime and carry my phone everywhere.
× I don't like make him otherwise because I already showed him on light.
✓ I don't like making lists because I already showed him the light.
这里动词短语需要使用动名词形式'making',而不是动词原形'make'。动词后面接动名词表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事。
× For example, I already or yours are sharp.
✓ For example, I already have some sharp ones.
这里需要使用复数形式来表示多个物品,'or yours'不合适,应改为复数名词。
× I see a good goods.
✓ I see good goods.
'a'用于单数名词,'goods'是复数名词,不能与'a'连用。
× I I will.
✓ I will.
重复的'I'应去掉,保持句子简洁。
× Yes, I already I already too making working tables be 'cause I'm on doesn't teacher.
✓ Yes, I am already making working tables because I am a teacher.
动词后应使用动名词形式'making',并且句子结构需要调整使其通顺。
× For example I already are making dancing on.
✓ For example, I am already making dance plans.
'are making dancing'结构不正确,'dancing'应改为名词或动词不定式形式,且主谓一致需要调整。
× Take table team to teach students.
✓ I take the table team to teach students.
句子缺少主语,且需要加定冠词'the'使句子完整。
× I don't like making levels because I think it can get me a lot of price.
✓ I don't like making lists because I think it can cost me a lot of money.
'making levels'应为'making lists','price'用法不当,应改为'money'。
× For example I can I can follow the table time to to do.
✓ For example, I can follow the timetable to do things.
句子结构混乱,重复词语需删除,'table time'应为'timetable'。
× On some things, but I don't like.
✓ I don't like it for some things.
句子不完整,需补充主语和谓语使其完整。
× Anna cues on my phone because I think it is a convenience that is that yours making my phone for example, I already can watching table lives on my phone, so I think it's a very convenient.
✓ I use my phone because I think it is convenient. For example, I can watch live tables on my phone, so I think it's very convenient.
'Anna cues'不合适,应为'I use','yours making'错误,'can watching'应为'can watch',句子需要简化和调整代词使用。