Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Actually when I go to the shop, I didn't do any listing of my what to buy things that I need to buy. Because. When I do my list, what's the time I buy something different? Buy ICE.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's really. Yes I do. List of my, what I did what, what I will do next. Day three things I show this this wallpaper. This things work very well and help me to achieve my goals easily. Specially when I said 3.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Interesting question. I think my people think they they will not do it. Even they said theatricals 3 days 3 three things today but they will not do it over in and they do a listing in in.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Hi prefer to do a my list on phone because it makes it so much convenience for me. An easy way to write and delete if there is anything I didn't I I don't do our. I need to clock, cross or readily take untreated.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answers clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then explain your reason using simple and correct sentences. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' properly to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I often change my mind and buy different things. For example, I might plan to buy vegetables but end up buying ice cream instead.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer. Use correct sentence structures and avoid repetition. Explain how making lists helps you, and use linking words like 'especially' to add details.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work. I write down what I have done and what I need to do next. This method works well, especially when I limit my tasks to three important things each day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Explain reasons logically and use linking words like 'because' or 'even though'.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think they won't follow them. Even if they plan three tasks a day, they might not complete them and feel the list is useless.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and clear. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. Explain your preference with reasons and use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make my list on my phone because it is very convenient. I can easily add or delete items without crossing out or erasing on paper.
× Actually when I go to the shop, I didn't do any listing of my what to buy things that I need to buy.
✓ Actually, when I go to the shop, I don't make any list of the things I need to buy.
The original sentence incorrectly mixes past tense 'didn't do' with present tense context 'when I go'. The action of making a list is habitual, so present tense should be used. Also, 'listing of my what to buy things' is awkward and ungrammatical; it should be 'make a list of the things I need to buy'. Use present simple tense for habitual actions.
× Because. When I do my list, what's the time I buy something different? Buy ICE.
✓ Because when I make my list, I often end up buying something different, like ice.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Because.' is a sentence fragment. 'What's the time I buy something different?' is ungrammatical and confusing. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into a clear, complete sentence using present simple tense and proper structure.
× Yes, it's really. Yes I do. List of my, what I did what, what I will do next.
✓ Yes, I really do. I make a list of what I have done and what I will do next.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. 'Yes, it's really.' is incomplete. The phrase 'List of my, what I did what, what I will do next.' is ungrammatical. The correction provides a clear, complete sentence with proper tense usage and structure.
× Day three things I show this this wallpaper.
✓ Each day, I list three things; I show this on this wallpaper.
The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It seems to mean that the speaker lists three things daily and shows them on a wallpaper. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× This things work very well and help me to achieve my goals easily. Specially when I said 3.
✓ These things work very well and help me achieve my goals easily, especially when I set three tasks.
'This things' should be 'These things' (plural demonstrative). 'Specially' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'especially'. 'When I said 3' is unclear; likely meant 'when I set three tasks'. The correction fixes demonstrative adjective, adverb, and clarifies meaning.
× I think my people think they they will not do it.
✓ I think many people think they will not do it.
'My people' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'many people'. Also, the repetition 'they they' is an error. The correction replaces 'my' with 'many' and removes the duplicate pronoun.
× Even they said theatricals 3 days 3 three things today but they will not do it over in and they do a listing in in.
✓ Even if they say they will do three things today for three days, they often do not follow through and do not make a list consistently.
The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'theatricals' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'they say' or 'they tell'. The phrase 'over in and they do a listing in in' is unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.
× Hi prefer to do a my list on phone because it makes it so much convenience for me.
✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because it is very convenient for me.
'Hi' should be 'I'. 'do a my list' is incorrect; 'make my list' is correct. 'on phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'makes it so much convenience' is incorrect; 'is very convenient' is correct. The correction fixes pronouns, verb usage, and adjective form.
× An easy way to write and delete if there is anything I didn't I I don't do our.
✓ It is an easy way to write and delete if there is anything I don't want to keep.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'didn't I I don't do our' is ungrammatical and confusing. The correction provides a clear sentence with proper verb usage and meaning.
× I need to clock, cross or readily take untreated.
✓ I can check, cross out, or easily delete items.
The original sentence uses incorrect words 'clock' instead of 'check', 'readily take untreated' is unclear. The correction uses appropriate verbs and phrases to express the intended meaning clearly.