List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りや発音の問題が見られ、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。より自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。例えば、"I usually don't make a shopping list because I can remember what I need, but I do make one when I have to buy essential items." のように表現できます。

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list because I can remember what I need, but I do make one when I have to buy essential items.

Gợi ý: 内容は理解できますが、文法ミスや単語の誤用（"reduce tourists"は意味不明）があり、文章の流れもやや不自然です。接続詞を使って論理的に繋げ、正しい単語を選びましょう。例えば、"By writing down my tasks, I can think more clearly and reduce stress, which makes me more productive."などです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. By writing down my tasks, I can think more clearly and reduce stress, which makes me more productive. For example, when I have a busy day, it helps me prioritize important jobs.

Gợi ý: 表現が不自然で、文法や単語の誤りが多いです。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文を繋げましょう。例えば、"Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time, and others prefer to keep ideas in their minds because they are more creative."のように言えます。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time, and others prefer to keep ideas in their minds because they are more creative. For these reasons, they might avoid making lists altogether.

Gợi ý: 単語の誤用（"ethnic devices"は誤り）や文法ミスがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。正しい単語を使い、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it uncomfortable to use electronic devices for this purpose."などです。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it uncomfortable to use electronic devices for this purpose. Also, paper is easier and more convenient when I want to quickly check my list. In my opinion, writing on paper helps me stay more organized.

× I don't make any list you Jerry.

✓ I don't make any list, Jerry.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used here; it should be the name 'Jerry' as a direct address, separated by a comma.

× It is becauses I can remember what I have to buy an eye.

✓ It is because I can remember what I have to buy in my mind.

The word 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. Also, 'an eye' is incorrect in this context; the correct phrase is 'in my mind' or 'by heart' to express memorization.

× Often depending on my mood when I go to shopping.

✓ It often depends on my mood when I go shopping.

The original sentence is a fragment lacking a subject and verb. Adding 'It' as the subject and 'depends' as the verb corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'go to shopping' should be 'go shopping'.

× However, when I have to buy something essential thing, I will make the list.

✓ However, when I have to buy something essential, I will make a list.

The phrase 'something essential thing' is redundant; 'something essential' suffices. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not a specific list previously mentioned.

× Often depending on my mood when I go to shopping.

✓ It often depends on my mood when I go shopping.

The verb 'depending' should be changed to 'depends' to agree with the subject 'It'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'.

× By writing down my tasks I can think more clearly an reduce tourists which makes me more productive.

✓ By writing down my tasks, I can think more clearly and reduce distractions, which makes me more productive.

The word 'an' should be 'and'. 'Tourists' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'distractions' or 'interruptions'.

× For example when I have a busy day at least helps me.

✓ For example, when I have a busy day, it helps me prioritize important jobs.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it' as the subject and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it waste their time or so.

✓ I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes their time or so.

The verb 'waste' should be 'wastes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Some people are very creative oh and prefer to keep their ideas in their minds rather than writing on down.

✓ Some people are very creative and prefer to keep their ideas in their minds rather than writing them down.

The interjection 'oh' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'writing on down' should be 'writing them down'.

× For these reasons they might avoid making this all together.

✓ For these reasons, they might avoid making this altogether.

The phrase 'all together' should be 'altogether' meaning 'completely'. Also, a comma is needed after 'reasons'.

× I preferred to make a list on paper because I found it uncomfortable to use ethnic devices for this purpose.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I find it uncomfortable to use electronic devices for this purpose.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the context suggests a present preference, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'ethnic devices' is a typo; it should be 'electronic devices'.

× Also, paper is easier to live an more convenient when I want to quickly check my list.

✓ Also, paper is easier to use and more convenient when I want to quickly check my list.

The phrase 'easier to live an more convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'easier to use and more convenient'.