Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I. I write love paper. I can see love. I want to buy something.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes. 'Cause list can clear true my drop I can see today I can and do something to my job.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people say something think list is very must so she and people don't like. Make list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I like to mark to my phone becauses Rory. Easy to use I can see, but in paper I think is not varying quickly see.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不清晰,缺乏完整句子和逻辑。建议练习用完整句子表达购物时制作购物清单的习惯,并使用连接词使回答更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on paper because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答语法和表达混乱,难以理解。建议用完整句子说明工作中制作清单的习惯及其效果,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly, so I can complete them efficiently each day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且含糊,缺乏具体原因。建议明确说明为什么有些人不喜欢制作清单,并用连接词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too strict or time-consuming, which makes them feel pressured.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 表达不清晰,语法错误较多。建议用完整句子比较手机和纸质清单的优缺点,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to use and I can quickly check and update it, unlike paper lists which are less convenient.
× Yes, I. I write love paper.
✓ Yes, I write a list on paper.
句子结构混乱,缺少完整表达。应明确表达“我在纸上写清单”,使句子完整通顺。
× I can see love.
✓ I can see it.
“love”用法错误,应使用指代清单的代词“it”。
× I want to buy something.
✓ I want to buy something.
句子本身无语法错误,保持原句。
× 'Cause list can clear true my drop I can see today I can and do something to my job.
✓ Because the list can clear my tasks, I can see what to do today and complete my work.
句子结构混乱,表达不清。应调整语序和用词,使句子表达清晰完整。
× Some people say something think list is very must so she and people don't like. Make list.
✓ Some people think making a list is very necessary, but they don't like to make lists.
代词使用错误,句子不完整且表达混乱。应使用正确代词并调整句子结构。
× I like to mark to my phone becauses Rory.
✓ I like to make a list on my phone because it's easy to use.
介词使用错误,“mark to my phone”应改为“make a list on my phone”,并修正拼写错误。
× Easy to use I can see, but in paper I think is not varying quickly see.
✓ It's easy to use and I can see it clearly, but on paper, I think it's not as quick to see.
句子结构混乱,表达不清。应调整语序和用词,使句子通顺易懂。