Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I usually make all this when I shop because it. It should help me. To prepare myself in my. My plan?
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I make a list for my work and it works because when I use a list for my job I can. Doing my job well and. I can put predict my finish work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, I think it is because some people turn to. Catch there? Their job and they will do their job easily and. Yes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Well I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I use my phone it contains alarm an it help me. To. To reminder would have. I2 and one what halftime?
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terstruktur. Cobalah untuk memberikan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Gunakan kalimat yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dan tambahkan alasan yang spesifik.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda perlu lebih terstruktur dan jelas. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan jelaskan bagaimana daftar tersebut membantu pekerjaan Anda dengan contoh spesifik. Hindari kalimat yang terputus-putus.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me complete tasks efficiently because I can prioritize and track my progress.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan alasan yang spesifik dan kalimat yang lengkap agar mudah dipahami.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and find lists restrictive.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan terdapat banyak kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas, serta hindari kata-kata yang tidak perlu.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it has alarms and reminders that help me stay on track.
× Yes I do. I usually make all this when I shop because it. It should help me. To prepare myself in my. My plan?
✓ Yes, I do. I usually make a list when I shop because it should help me prepare myself and my plan.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Yes I do. I make a list for my work and it works because when I use a list for my job I can. Doing my job well and. I can put predict my finish work.
✓ Yes, I do. I make a list for my work and it works because when I use a list for my job, I can do my job well and predict when I will finish my work.
The phrase 'I can. Doing my job well' is incorrect; 'can' should be followed by the base verb 'do'. Also, 'put predict my finish work' is incorrect; it should be 'predict when I will finish my work' for clarity and correctness.
× Well, I think it is because some people turn to. Catch there? Their job and they will do their job easily and. Yes.
✓ Well, I think it is because some people tend to neglect their job and they will do their job easily.
The phrase 'turn to. Catch there?' is unclear and incorrect. Replacing it with 'tend to neglect' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'there' should be 'their' to correctly refer to possession.
× Well I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I use my phone it contains alarm an it help me. To. To reminder would have. I2 and one what halftime?
✓ Well, I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because when I use my phone, it has an alarm and it helps me to remember what I have to do and when.
The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrases. 'Contains alarm' should be 'has an alarm', and 'help me to reminder' should be 'helps me to remember'. The rest of the sentence is rephrased for clarity.