List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect naturalness. Try to make your sentences more concise and directly answer the question. Avoid repetition and ensure your ideas flow logically by using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping, whether it's for groceries or other items. This helps me remember everything I need and saves time when I'm at the store.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use simpler sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning that includes all my work tasks. I also set reminders to help me stay on track and complete my goals efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons logically. Avoid awkward phrasing and focus on clarity.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but some sentences are unclear and contain errors. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and focus on expressing your preference clearly.

Ví dụ: Even though I use reminder apps, I prefer writing my to-do list in a diary every morning. Writing things down helps me remember my tasks better and plan my day effectively.

× Yes, I will be stressful to make a list while I'm going out for shopping and it could be a grocery line or for regular shopping.

✓ Yes, I get stressed when I make a list while I'm going out shopping, whether it's for groceries or regular shopping.

The phrase 'I will be stressful' incorrectly uses 'will be' with an adjective. The correct modal verb usage here is to express a current feeling with 'get stressed'. Also, 'going out for shopping' is better expressed as 'going out shopping'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I always I always make sure in order to have a complete list of the things that I want so that I so that I won't forget it time I go to the shop in order to buy those.

✓ I always make sure to have a complete list of the things that I want so that I won't forget them when I go to the shop to buy them.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect pronoun use ('it' instead of 'them') referring to plural 'things'. Also, 'so that I so that I won't forget it time' is repetitive and awkward. Correcting plural pronouns and removing redundancy improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I always make sure to make A to do list when I wake up in the morning about all the tasks for the work that he needs to do for the whole day itself.

✓ Yes, I always make sure to make a to-do list when I wake up in the morning about all the tasks I need to do for the whole day.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrectly used instead of 'I' which is the subject. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with correct article and hyphenation. Correcting pronouns and articles makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× Moreover, I also make sure in order to have the tasks mentioned in the reminder in order to meet all of my goals for the day effectively and efficiently.

✓ Moreover, I also make sure to have the tasks mentioned in the reminder to meet all of my goals for the day effectively and efficiently.

The phrase 'make sure in order to have' is awkward; 'make sure to have' is the correct form. Removing unnecessary prepositions improves sentence flow and correctness.

× Some of the people do not consider task management as one of the greatest things and the crucial things that we need to do. They believed that creating a list is just a wasted of time and they can when they can remember the things then why to waste the time in terms of making the whole list for the tasks that they need to do for the whole dates?

✓ Some people do not consider task management as one of the greatest or crucial things that we need to do. They believe that creating a list is just a waste of time, and if they can remember the things, then why waste time making a whole list of the tasks they need to do for the whole day?

The pronoun 'they' is inconsistently used with past tense 'believed' instead of present 'believe'. 'A wasted of time' is incorrect; it should be 'a waste of time'. Also, 'whole dates' is incorrect; 'whole day' fits context. Correcting pronouns, verb tense, and word choice improves clarity and grammar.

× Although technology has has changed a lot and everyone has became takes away. I use reminders in my app but I prefer making A to do list early in the morning on my diary so that I can remember all the tasks.

✓ Although technology has changed a lot and everyone has become more dependent on it, I use reminders in my app but I prefer making a to-do list early in the morning in my diary so that I can remember all the tasks.

The sentence has repeated words ('has has'), incorrect verb form 'has became' instead of 'has become', and unclear phrase 'takes away'. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list'. Correcting verb forms and articles improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.

× Once I write down all the tasks, I always have that information stored in my mind and I prefer to spend my day accordingly.

✓ Once I write down all the tasks, I always have that information stored in my mind, and I prefer to spend my day accordingly.

This sentence is grammatically correct but adding a comma before 'and' improves readability. No major grammatical error found.