Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for shopping because it can help me remember something I want to buy. I do, really. Right days. In the notes and it can help me. Bye cuz.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it can help me clearly for what I will do and. By writing down what I need to do, I can make sure I don't forget. I will do something.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because it may spend their they lot of time and the they could couldn't have much time to do this and some sometimes. They can't do all the things in the list. So they. Who wouldn't like to make a list?
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make list on paper because it helps me remember my task more clearly. When I finish a task I can easily know. What task I haven't finished and.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不够连贯,存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议回答时保持句子完整,避免重复和无意义的词汇,确保表达自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy and saves time in the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整,建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点,同时使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱且不连贯,建议简洁明了地说明原因,避免重复和语法错误,使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and they may feel stressed if they can't complete everything on the list.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中断且不完整,建议使用完整句子表达观点,并用连接词连接句子,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because it helps me remember my tasks more clearly, and I can easily see which tasks I have completed and which ones are left.
× I do, really. Right days. In the notes and it can help me. Bye cuz.
✓ I do, really. I write down the items in the notes and it can help me. Bye.
原句句子结构混乱,缺少完整的谓语和连贯的表达。建议将句子整理为完整的陈述句,明确表达写下购物清单的行为。
× it can help me clearly for what I will do and.
✓ it can help me clearly know what I will do.
介词“for”使用不当,应该用动词短语“help me know”来表达帮助理解的意思。
× By writing down what I need to do, I can make sure I don't forget. I will do something.
✓ By writing down what I need to do, I can make sure I don't forget to do anything.
句子后半部分“ I will do something”不完整且不符合语境,建议改为完整表达确保不忘记做任何事情。
× Because it may spend their they lot of time and the they could couldn't have much time to do this and some sometimes.
✓ Because it may take a lot of their time and they might not have much time to do this sometimes.
“they lot”应为“a lot”,且“could couldn't”重复,且句子结构混乱,需调整为正确的单复数形式和语序。
× They can't do all the things in the list.
✓ They can't do all the things on the list.
介词“in”用错,应该用“on”来表示列表上的项目。
× So they. Who wouldn't like to make a list?
✓ So they don't. Who wouldn't like to make a list?
句子不完整,缺少谓语,建议补充完整表达。
× I prefer to make list on paper because it helps me remember my task more clearly.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me remember my tasks more clearly.
“list”前缺少冠词“a”,且“task”应为复数形式“tasks”以匹配上下文。
× When I finish a task I can easily know. What task I haven't finished and.
✓ When I finish a task, I can easily know which tasks I haven't finished yet.
句子断裂且“task”应为复数形式“tasks”,并且需要连接词使句子完整。