List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list is helpful, and give a specific reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I buy items from different markets. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and has many grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear and direct response. Use linking words to explain how making lists helps you at work, and provide specific examples. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list every day at work. It helps me manage my tasks efficiently and complete them on time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas clearly using correct grammar and linking words. Explain reasons why some people avoid making lists with specific details.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time. Also, they prefer to shop spontaneously without planning.

Gợi ý: Your answer is very unclear and difficult to understand. Try to clearly state your preference and explain why you prefer that method. Use simple and correct sentences with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because I enjoy writing by hand. It helps me remember things better and feels more personal.

× Yes, I can make when I go to shop and there are a lot of things that I need to shove Arpiar from different marketplaces.

✓ Yes, I can make a list when I go shopping and there are a lot of things that I need to shop for from different marketplaces.

The verb 'make' should be followed by the object 'a list' to clarify what is being made. The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by a verb in the -ing form to indicate the activity. Also, 'shove Arpiar' seems to be a mishearing or typo; assuming the intended meaning is 'shop for' items from different marketplaces. Using the correct verb forms and prepositions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× So it's very helpful for me and I like it because without list I don't want to go to shopping.

✓ So it's very helpful for me and I like it because without a list I don't want to go shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. This is because 'go' is followed by the gerund form of the verb to indicate the activity.

× Yes, I work when I go to office, so definitely I make smart list per force and there are so many trust present and I like to do every trust in every hours.

✓ Yes, I work when I go to the office, so definitely I make a smart list per force and there are so many tasks present and I like to do every task every hour.

The phrase 'go to office' needs the definite article 'the' before 'office' because it refers to a specific place. 'Make smart list' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'smart list'. The word 'trust' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'task'. 'Every trust in every hours' should be 'every task every hour' to use the correct singular form and remove unnecessary prepositions.

× They help me very and they helped me very well and I'd like.

✓ They help me a lot and they helped me very well and I'd like that.

The phrase 'help me very' is incomplete; it should be 'help me a lot' or 'help me very much' to express degree. Also, 'I'd like' is incomplete and needs an object or complement to complete the thought. Adding 'that' clarifies the sentence.

× Some people don't like making less because they have no. Time and they don't like it because every people wants to do for shopping so there definitely go and hopefully pick of the things of the glossary and can't make any notes for.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have no time and they don't like it because everyone wants to go shopping, so they definitely go and hopefully pick the things from the grocery without making any notes.

'Making less' should be 'making lists' as 'list' is the intended noun. 'Every people' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone' as 'people' is plural and 'everyone' is singular pronoun for all individuals. 'Do for shopping' should be 'go shopping'. 'Pick of the things of the glossary' is incorrect; it should be 'pick the things from the grocery'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun and preposition use.

× I always recommend favor because I like it and when I am reading, when I am re writing so my so my heart is very pleasant and I feel very well and definitely I like that type of list and every fear I can use it and a lots of things which are and.

✓ I always prefer paper because I like it and when I am reading or rewriting, my heart feels very pleasant and I feel very well. Definitely, I like that type of list and every time I can use it for a lot of things.

'Recommend favor' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'prefer paper'. 'Re writing' should be 'rewriting' as one word. 'My heart is very pleasant' is an unusual expression; 'my heart feels very pleasant' is more natural. 'Every fear' is likely 'every time'. 'A lots of things which are and' is incomplete and corrected to 'a lot of things'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun and article use.