Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Not really, unfortunately, not really, because when I went something I usually buy anything that I my size had approached that an. But I I don't look at the prices.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yeah. I'm a planner, so I have. Need to make a list for my work because it's night. Remind me how to do. Next steps are also how to do it grew it really.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, the majority of people don't like making lists because, uh, they don't want to be forced by something. They want to do free. Free and they want to do by the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer. Make a list on my my PayPal phone that my paper. A four step. This is because my phone is very convenience for symbol I can share. My plans and also I can save alot place another.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. When I go shopping, I just buy clothes that fit me well without checking the prices carefully.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng về việc bạn làm danh sách công việc như thế nào và nó có hiệu quả ra sao.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember the tasks I need to complete and plan the next steps effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không đầy đủ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, giải thích rõ lý do và tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác hoặc lặp lại.
Ví dụ: I think many people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and prefer to have the freedom to decide what to do spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hơn giấy.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I can easily share my plans with others and save them without worrying about losing paper.
× because when I went something I usually buy anything that I my size had approached that an.
✓ because when I went shopping I usually bought anything that was my size.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'went something' instead of 'went shopping' and mixes tenses improperly. 'Went' is past tense, so the verb 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought'. Also, 'had approached that an' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'was my size' to describe the item fitting the student.
× I usually buy anything that I my size had approached that an.
✓ I usually bought anything that was my size.
The phrase 'I my size had approached that an' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correct order is to state the item 'was my size' to describe the noun properly.
× But I I don't look at the prices.
✓ But I don't look at the prices.
The repetition of 'I' is a typographical error and disrupts sentence structure. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence.
× I'm a planner, so I have. Need to make a list for my work because it's night.
✓ I'm a planner, so I need to make a list for my work because it's night.
The sentence is fragmented with an unnecessary period after 'have'. Combining the sentence properly improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Remind me how to do. Next steps are also how to do it grew it really.
✓ It reminds me how to do the next steps and how to do it really well.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammatical errors.
× They want to do free. Free and they want to do by the.
✓ They want to be free and do things their own way.
The original sentence uses 'do free' and 'do by the' which are incorrect. The corrected sentence uses proper pronouns and expressions to convey the intended meaning.
× I prefer. Make a list on my my PayPal phone that my paper.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.
The phrase 'my PayPal phone that my paper' is incorrect and confusing. The correct preposition 'on' is used with 'phone' and 'paper', and the sentence is restructured for clarity.
× This is because my phone is very convenience for symbol I can share.
✓ This is because my phone is very convenient; I can share.
'Convenience' is a noun, but the adjective 'convenient' is needed to describe 'my phone'. The sentence is also split for clarity.
× My plans and also I can save alot place another.
✓ My plans, and also I can save a lot of places.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors like 'alot' instead of 'a lot' and unclear phrasing. The correction improves sentence structure and clarity.