Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I only make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what targeted by so I don't forget important items. Also it stops me from buying things I don't where needed so it saves money and time. You know without the next I open by a lot of round and stuff that I don't even need.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
I do make do these for my work quite often. It helps me organize my tasks and keeps me focused. I found that writing things down makes it easier to trick what I have done and what still needs to be done. So yes, it definitely works for me. I mean without eight I will work this.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people might find making least boring or time consuming. Also some might feel the latest are too restrictive and prefer to be most bound turners as only simply forget or don't say they need because if you they can remember things each day. It's really depends on the different situations.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making this on my phone because it's easier to flow and change. I mean I can quickly add or delete items and time, and I can even set alarms to remind myself which helps me stay tantrik. However, if I read my list on paper I might just law say it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有一些语法错误和用词不当,影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意句子结构,避免拼写错误,并使用更准确的词汇表达。例如,将“targeted by”改为“to buy”,将“where needed”改为“are not needed”。同时,回答可以更简洁,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the store. It helps me remember what to buy and prevents me from purchasing unnecessary items, which saves both time and money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误,如“do make do these”、“trick”、“eight I will work this”,影响理解。建议练习正确的句子结构和词汇使用,确保表达清晰。可以用更自然的表达方式说明做清单的好处。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work. They help me organize my tasks and stay focused. Writing things down makes it easier to track what I have completed and what still needs to be done.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误,句子不连贯,影响理解。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的词汇和语法,表达观点时要清晰有条理。
Ví dụ: Some people may find making lists boring or time-consuming. Others might feel that lists are too restrictive and prefer to remember things without writing them down. It depends on personal preferences and situations.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误和表达不清的问题,如“flow”、“tantrik”、“law say it”。建议使用准确的词汇和表达,避免模糊不清。可以明确比较手机和纸质清单的优缺点。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to edit and update. I can quickly add or delete items and set reminders, which helps me stay organized. Paper lists are less flexible and easier to lose.
× It helps me remember what targeted by so I don't forget important items.
✓ It helps me remember what is targeted so I don't forget important items.
句子中缺少动词,导致结构不完整。应补充动词"is",使句子完整。
× Also it stops me from buying things I don't where needed so it saves money and time.
✓ Also it stops me from buying things I don't need, so it saves money and time.
"where"用错,应为"need",表示不需要的东西。
× You know without the next I open by a lot of round and stuff that I don't even need.
✓ You know, without the list, I end up buying a lot of random stuff that I don't even need.
句子结构混乱,词语使用错误,需调整为正确表达。
× I do make do these for my work quite often.
✓ I do make these for my work quite often.
"do make do these"中多余的"do"应删除。
× I found that writing things down makes it easier to trick what I have done and what still needs to be done.
✓ I found that writing things down makes it easier to track what I have done and what still needs to be done.
"trick"用错,应为"track",表示跟踪。
× I mean without eight I will work this.
✓ I mean without it, I wouldn't be able to work like this.
句子不完整且词语错误,需调整为完整且正确表达。
× I think some people might find making least boring or time consuming.
✓ I think some people might find making lists boring or time-consuming.
"least"应为复数形式"lists",表示多个清单。
× Also some might feel the latest are too restrictive and prefer to be most bound turners as only simply forget or don't say they need because if you they can remember things each day.
✓ Also some might feel the lists are too restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous as they simply forget or don't say they need them because they can remember things each day.
句子中词语使用错误,表达不清,需调整为正确的形容词和结构。
× It's really depends on the different situations.
✓ It really depends on different situations.
"It's really depends"结构错误,应为"It really depends"。
× I prefer making this on my phone because it's easier to flow and change.
✓ I prefer making this on my phone because it's easier to follow and change.
"flow"用错,应为"follow",表示遵循。
× I mean I can quickly add or delete items and time, and I can even set alarms to remind myself which helps me stay tantrik.
✓ I mean I can quickly add or delete items anytime, and I can even set alarms to remind myself which helps me stay on track.
"time"应为"anytime","tantrik"拼写错误,应为"on track"。
× However, if I read my list on paper I might just law say it.
✓ However, if I read my list on paper, I might just lose it.
"law say it"无意义,应为"lose it",表示可能会丢失。