Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
List when you shop. Yes, of course, because I think it's a way to help me to stick to my budget and save my time. Well I usually making it clear please before get to the shop because it's helped me to not exactly what I need to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Oh yes of course. I always make a list for whole life for all activities to and need to do in a day because there are a bunch of things that I need to complete during the day. And I can't remember all of them, so I need. Like. Something that can help me to stay on track of Singer.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, I think that because they might see it as a waste of time, an unnecessary activity, especially for people who want to shop quickly or also for the people who enjoy the spontaneous. Feelings of shopping with our plan.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
My phone definitely first of all because I can, it's really convenient as I can carry it to anyone I want, so I can like have the list. With me every time. An offer someone I have a todos list on my phone like an. It usually helps me to remind my. Quick.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I usually making' hay 'it's helped me to not exactly what I need to buy'. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stick to my budget and save time. I usually prepare it clearly before going to the store, so I know exactly what I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn trong công việc.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list of all the tasks I need to complete each day because I have many responsibilities. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần được nối liền mạch hơn và tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để làm rõ ý và mở rộng thêm lý do cụ thể hơn về việc tại sao một số người không thích lập danh sách.
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they see it as a waste of time. Also, those who prefer to shop quickly or enjoy the spontaneous feeling of shopping without a plan might avoid making lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh các câu bị ngắt quãng và sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I can carry it anywhere and always have my list with me. It also helps me remember my tasks quickly and efficiently.
× Well I usually making it clear please before get to the shop because it's helped me to not exactly what I need to buy.
✓ Well I usually make it clear please before getting to the shop because it helps me to know exactly what I need to buy.
The verb 'making' is incorrectly used after 'usually'; the correct form is the base verb 'make' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'before get' should be 'before getting' because 'before' is followed by a gerund. 'It's helped me to not exactly what I need to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps me to know exactly what I need to buy' to express present habitual action and correct meaning.
× Well I usually making it clear please before get to the shop because it's helped me to not exactly what I need to buy.
✓ Well I usually make it clear please before getting to the shop because it helps me to know exactly what I need to buy.
The phrase 'before get to the shop' is incorrect; the correct preposition usage is 'before getting to the shop' because 'before' is followed by a gerund form of the verb.
× because it's helped me to not exactly what I need to buy.
✓ because it helps me to know exactly what I need to buy.
The phrase 'it's helped me' incorrectly uses past tense 'helped' when the context is about a habitual action; present tense 'helps' is appropriate here.
× I always make a list for whole life for all activities to and need to do in a day because there are a bunch of things that I need to complete during the day.
✓ I always make a list for my whole life for all activities I need to do in a day because there are a bunch of things that I need to complete during the day.
The phrase 'for whole life for all activities to and need to do' is ungrammatical and confusing. It should be 'for my whole life for all activities I need to do' to clarify meaning and correct sentence structure.
× And I can't remember all of them, so I need. Like. Something that can help me to stay on track of Singer.
✓ And I can't remember all of them, so I need something that can help me stay on track.
The sentence is fragmented with 'so I need. Like.' which is incorrect. Also, 'stay on track of Singer' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'stay on track' to express the intended meaning clearly.
× Well, I think that because they might see it as a waste of time, an unnecessary activity, especially for people who want to shop quickly or also for the people who enjoy the spontaneous.
✓ Well, I think that because they might see it as a waste of time, an unnecessary activity, especially for people who want to shop quickly or for people who enjoy spontaneous shopping.
The phrase 'enjoy the spontaneous' is incomplete and incorrect; 'spontaneous' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify, such as 'spontaneous shopping'.
× Feelings of shopping with our plan.
✓ Feelings of shopping without a plan.
The pronoun 'our' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'without a plan' to express the intended meaning of spontaneous shopping.
× My phone definitely first of all because I can, it's really convenient as I can carry it to anyone I want, so I can like have the list.
✓ My phone definitely, first of all because it's really convenient as I can carry it anywhere I want, so I can have the list.
The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'carry it to anyone'; the correct preposition is 'anywhere' to indicate location.
× An offer someone I have a todos list on my phone like an.
✓ Also, I have a to-do list on my phone.
The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it should be restructured to a clear statement about having a to-do list on the phone.
× It usually helps me to remind my. Quick.
✓ It usually helps me to remind me quickly.
The adverb 'quick' is incorrectly placed and used; it should be 'quickly' and placed after the verb to modify it properly.