Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. This helps me remember all the items I need and seems hand 'cause I don't want to wander around the store. It also prevents me from buying unnecessary things, which is very convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work and it really helps me stay organized. For example, on busy days, having a tier list allows me to prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting anything important. This makes me feel more confident and efficient throughout the day.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people don't like making list because it can make them throw more strikes. For instance, seeing a long list of tasks make might make them more about not finishing everything on 10. Also, some people prefer to be more spontaneous rather than planning everything even once.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make list. All my food because making this on my phone can. Make my house more clearly. It's very convenient for me to update my tasks to see what I have done. Alrighty, and what's the?
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,影响了语言的自然流畅性。建议注意句子结构,避免口语化缩写和错误表达,同时保持答案简洁且逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary things, which saves time and money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,结构清晰且内容具体。但“tier list”用词不准确,建议使用更合适的词汇如“to-do list”。同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work, and it really helps me stay organized. For example, on busy days, the list allows me to prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting anything important, so I feel more confident and efficient.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法和表达错误,导致意思不清晰。建议加强语法基础,使用准确表达,避免模糊和错误的词汇。回答应更具体并逻辑连贯。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel overwhelmed by too many tasks. For example, seeing a long list might make them anxious about not finishing everything. Also, some prefer to be spontaneous instead of planning everything in advance.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱且不完整,语法错误严重,表达不清。建议加强基础表达训练,确保回答完整且逻辑清晰。回答时应直接回应问题并提供具体理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient to update tasks and check what I have completed. Using my phone helps me stay organized and saves paper.
× I think some people don't like making list because it can make them throw more strikes.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it can make them throw more strikes.
这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”,因为指的是一般意义上的多个清单。中文解释:名词复数形式错误,表示多个清单时应使用复数。
× For instance, seeing a long list of tasks make might make them more about not finishing everything on 10.
✓ For instance, seeing a long list of tasks might make them more worried about not finishing everything on time.
句中“make”应为“might make”,且“more about”不合适,应为“more worried about”。中文解释:动词形式错误,且表达不完整,需调整动词和短语使句意明确。
× I prefer to make list. All my food because making this on my phone can. Make my house more clearly.
✓ I prefer to make lists. All my food because making this on my phone can make my house more organized.
“list”应为复数“lists”,且句子结构不完整,需补充完整表达。中文解释:名词复数错误,句子不完整,需补充完整表达。
× All my food because making this on my phone can. Make my house more clearly.
✓ I list all my food because making this on my phone can help me organize my house more clearly.
原句断句错误,导致语义不清,需调整句子结构使其连贯。中文解释:句子结构错误,断句不当,导致表达不清晰。
× Alrighty, and what's the?
✓ Alrighty, and what's that?
句子不完整,缺少必要成分,需补充完整。中文解释:句子不完整,缺少必要成分,导致表达不清楚。