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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

No. But I want to try to make a list when I shop.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have two mega list when I work because I often forget something important things when I working.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Some people dislike making list because they find the process is time-consuming and the retractive. They may feel that this they mean their creativity.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I preferred to make a list on paper. Because when I bow down sound work, I can. Raila, check out the paper.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,表达有些生硬。建议用更自然的表达方式,并且补充原因,使回答更完整。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop, but I want to try it because it might help me remember everything I need.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式,并且简洁明了地说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make two big lists for my work because I often forget important things while working.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 表达不够准确,单词使用错误。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构,清楚表达观点。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and limits their creativity.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯,语法和词汇错误严重,难以理解。建议简洁明了地表达偏好,并给出理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to check them when I'm busy with work.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I have two mega list when I work because I often forget something important things when I working.

Yes, I have two mega lists when I work because I often forget some important things when I am working.

这里的“list”应为复数形式“lists”,因为前面有数量词“two”,表示两个清单。

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, I have two mega list when I work because I often forget something important things when I working.

Yes, I have two mega lists when I work because I often forget some important things when I am working.

“when I working”缺少助动词,应改为“when I am working”,表示现在进行时态。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I have two mega list when I work because I often forget something important things when I working.

Yes, I have two mega lists when I work because I often forget some important things when I am working.

“something important things”中“something”和“things”重复且矛盾,应改为“some important things”,表示一些重要的事情。

Singular and plural issue

× Some people dislike making list because they find the process is time-consuming and the retractive.

Some people dislike making lists because they find the process is time-consuming and retractive.

“making list”中的“list”应为复数形式“lists”,因为泛指制作清单的行为。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Some people dislike making list because they find the process is time-consuming and the retractive.

Some people dislike making lists because they find the process is time-consuming and retractive.

“the retractive”中“retractive”用法不当,应去掉冠词“the”,且“retractive”可能是想表达“restrictive”或“distractive”,需确认词义。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They may feel that this they mean their creativity.

They may feel that this limits their creativity.

“this they mean their creativity”结构混乱,应改为“this limits their creativity”,表达“这限制了他们的创造力”。

Past tense issue

× I preferred to make a list on paper.

I prefer to make a list on paper.

回答中描述的是一般现在时的偏好,应使用“prefer”而非过去式“preferred”。

Sentence structure errors

× Because when I bow down sound work, I can. Raila, check out the paper.

Because when I am busy working, I can easily check the paper.

原句结构混乱且有拼写错误,应调整为“Because when I am busy working, I can easily check the paper.”,表达清晰完整。

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