Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Not really. I just think. What do I have to buy? But I don't make a list for shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Not really. I usually don't make a list, but I'm working. Because I'm not that. Good person and I'm not that particular so I always just think about. What I have to do, and I just do it. It's my, it's my life.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think it's really tired. And making a list is also tired and after. Like there have some. Thinking grab some thinking about sue I have to doing and I have to turn about the list that is really piles of people tired. There's a really.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer to write a note. On a paper. Because it's more remotable. For my memory.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but lacks fluency and natural phrasing. Try to combine your ideas into smoother sentences and avoid short, choppy phrases. Also, provide a bit more detail to enrich your answer.
Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I just think about what I need to buy before I go to the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure. Explain your habits and reasons more coherently.
Ví dụ: I usually don't make a list for my work because I'm not very organized. I just keep in mind what I need to do and complete my tasks one by one.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your thoughts logically.
Ví dụ: I think some people find making lists tiring because it requires a lot of thinking and planning, which can be stressful for them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and explaining your preference in more detail.
Ví dụ: I prefer to write my lists on paper because it helps me remember things better than using my phone.
× Not really. I just think. What do I have to buy? But I don't make a list for shopping.
✓ Not really. I just think about what I have to buy, but I don't make a list for shopping.
The original sentence has fragmented sentences and missing prepositions. 'I just think' is incomplete; it should be 'I just think about'. Also, combining the sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Not really. I usually don't make a list, but I'm working. Because I'm not that. Good person and I'm not that particular so I always just think about. What I have to do, and I just do it. It's my, it's my life.
✓ Not really. I usually don't make a list, but I am working. Because I'm not that good a person and I'm not that particular, so I always just think about what I have to do, and I just do it. It's my life.
The original contains sentence fragments and incorrect punctuation. 'I'm not that. Good person' should be 'I'm not that good a person'. Also, 'think about. What I have to do' should be combined into one sentence. Correct punctuation and sentence structure are necessary for clarity.
× I think it's really tired. And making a list is also tired and after. Like there have some. Thinking grab some thinking about sue I have to doing and I have to turn about the list that is really piles of people tired. There's a really.
✓ I think it's really tiring. Making a list is also tiring. Sometimes, thinking about what I have to do and going through the list makes people really tired.
The original uses 'tired' incorrectly; the correct adjective to describe something causing fatigue is 'tiring'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring and correcting verb forms improve comprehension.
× I think I prefer to write a note. On a paper. Because it's more remotable. For my memory.
✓ I think I prefer to write a note on paper because it's more memorable for my memory.
'On a paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. 'Remotable' is incorrect; the correct word is 'memorable'. Also, 'for my memory' is acceptable but could be simplified to 'helps my memory' for clarity.