Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, another type of person who likes to make a shopping list. I prefer to just to walk around the market and browses. This way I can discover interesting things and enjoy the shopping experience more.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Actually another type of person who likes making list. However, I have to make a list for my work because it's always reminds me of unfinished test and helps me prior memorize important things. For example then write down my tax. I feel so organized and less likely to cooked anything.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
For some people, making this can feel restrictive because. And if you're pressured to complete every text. Personally, I find it boring to follow a strict list and sometimes it even makes the process leasing tribal and predictable. Therefore, some preferred to be more flexible with your plans.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to use. For example, I can quickly add items and delete items. In send reminders to organize my text by date which help me stay efficient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“another type of person”用法不当,且句子结构不完整。建议使用更自然的表达方式,注意主谓一致和时态,避免重复和冗余。
Ví dụ: No, I am not the type of person who makes a shopping list. I prefer to walk around the market and browse freely because it allows me to discover interesting items and enjoy the shopping experience more.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,且内容不够具体。建议理清句子结构,使用正确的时态和词汇,明确表达原因和例子。
Ví dụ: Actually, I am the type of person who likes making lists for work. It helps me remember unfinished tasks and prioritize important things. For example, I write down my tax deadlines, which makes me feel organized and less likely to forget anything.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中句子不完整且有拼写错误,表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子,注意拼写和语法,逻辑清晰地表达观点。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because it can feel restrictive and stressful if they have to complete every task. Personally, I find following a strict list boring and predictable, so I prefer to be more flexible with my plans.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题,如“In send reminders”应为“I can send reminders”。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and easy to use. For example, I can quickly add or delete items, and I can send reminders to organize my tasks by date, which helps me stay efficient.
× No, another type of person who likes to make a shopping list.
✓ No, I am another type of person who likes to make a shopping list.
句子缺少主语,导致表达不完整。需要加上主语“I am”来明确说话者的身份。
× I prefer to just to walk around the market and browses.
✓ I prefer to just walk around the market and browse.
动词“browse”应与主语“I”保持一致,使用原形动词。多余的“to”应删除。
× Actually another type of person who likes making list.
✓ Actually, I am another type of person who likes making lists.
缺少主语“I am”,且“list”应为复数“lists”,表示泛指。
× because it's always reminds me of unfinished test and helps me prior memorize important things.
✓ because it always reminds me of unfinished tasks and helps me prioritize memorizing important things.
“it's always reminds”中“it's”应为“it”,去掉多余的“is”;“test”应为复数“tasks”;“prior memorize”应改为“prioritize memorizing”,动词搭配错误。
× For example then write down my tax.
✓ For example, then I write down my tax.
句子缺少主语“I”,且“then”前应加逗号。
× I feel so organized and less likely to cooked anything.
✓ I feel so organized and less likely to cook anything.
“to cooked”中“cooked”应为动词原形“cook”,因为“to”后接动词原形。
× For some people, making this can feel restrictive because.
✓ For some people, making lists can feel restrictive because...
句子不完整,缺少原因部分;“making this”应为“making lists”,更符合语境。
× And if you're pressured to complete every text.
✓ And if you're pressured to complete every task,
句子不完整,缺少主句;“text”应为“task”,更符合语境。
× Therefore, some preferred to be more flexible with your plans.
✓ Therefore, some prefer to be more flexible with their plans.
主语“some”与代词“your”不一致,应使用“their”。
× In send reminders to organize my text by date which help me stay efficient.
✓ I send reminders to organize my tasks by date, which helps me stay efficient.
“In send”应为“I send”;“text”应为“tasks”;“which help”主谓不一致,应为“which helps”。