Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I you should make a list before I go to the store because the list could have me to remember all the items I need to buy and this way you can avoid the forgotten for getting the important things I need to buy and save time.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, in the morning at the beginning of my work I usually make a list because I clearly tell me what what is most important and what we I need to do in the falling working day.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think it depends. For example some, some for example some people's work is. Only one or two task to to do in the following day and other guys maybe they just like remember their work in band.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a little on my phone and you. Because I'm carrying my phone everywhere and in my pocket, but I don't need to. Take a paper with me so it's more convenient to make list on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用连词使句子更连贯。例如,可以直接说“我会列购物清单,这样可以帮助我记住需要买的东西,避免忘记重要的物品,同时节省时间。”
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember all the items I need, prevents me from forgetting important things, and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用简单明了的句子,直接回答问题,并用连词连接细节。例如,“我通常在早上开始工作时列清单,这样我可以清楚地知道当天最重要的任务。”
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list at the start of my workday because it helps me clearly identify the most important tasks I need to complete that day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯且有重复和语法错误。建议先给出观点,然后用具体例子支持,使用连词使表达更流畅。例如,“有些人不喜欢列清单,因为他们的工作任务很少,或者他们习惯于用记忆来管理工作。”
Ví dụ: I think it depends. For example, some people have only one or two tasks to do the next day, so they don't feel the need to make a list. Others prefer to remember their tasks mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不自然的问题。建议简洁表达偏好,并说明原因,使用连词连接句子。例如,“我更喜欢用手机列清单,因为我随身携带手机,这样比带纸更方便。”
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I carry it everywhere in my pocket, so it's more convenient than using paper.
× Yes, I you should make a list before I go to the store because the list could have me to remember all the items I need to buy and this way you can avoid the forgotten for getting the important things I need to buy and save time.
✓ Yes, I think you should make a list before you go to the store because the list can help me remember all the items I need to buy, and this way you can avoid forgetting the important things and save time.
The modal verb 'could have me to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'can help me remember'. Also, 'forgotten for getting' is incorrect; the correct form is 'forgetting'. Modal verbs should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. The sentence also had pronoun inconsistency and awkward phrasing, which were corrected for clarity.
× Yes, I you should make a list before I go to the store because the list could have me to remember all the items I need to buy and this way you can avoid the forgotten for getting the important things I need to buy and save time.
✓ Yes, I think you should make a list before you go to the store because the list can help me remember all the items I need to buy, and this way you can avoid forgetting the important things and save time.
The pronouns 'I you' and mixing 'I' and 'you' in the same sentence cause confusion. The sentence was corrected to maintain consistent pronouns appropriate to the context.
× Yes, in the morning at the beginning of my work I usually make a list because I clearly tell me what what is most important and what we I need to do in the falling working day.
✓ Yes, in the morning at the beginning of my work, I usually make a list because it clearly tells me what is most important and what I need to do in the following working day.
The phrase 'I clearly tell me' is incorrect; the subject should be 'it' referring to the list. Also, 'falling working day' is a wrong phrase; it should be 'following working day'. Present tense is used correctly but the sentence structure and pronouns were incorrect.
× Yes, in the morning at the beginning of my work I usually make a list because I clearly tell me what what is most important and what we I need to do in the falling working day.
✓ Yes, in the morning at the beginning of my work, I usually make a list because it clearly tells me what is most important and what I need to do in the following working day.
The pronouns 'I clearly tell me' and 'we I' are incorrect. The list is the subject that 'tells' the speaker what to do, so 'it clearly tells me' is correct. 'We I' is a mistake and should be 'I'.
× I think it depends. For example some, some for example some people's work is. Only one or two task to to do in the following day and other guys maybe they just like remember their work in band.
✓ I think it depends. For example, some people's work involves only one or two tasks to do in the following day, and other people maybe just like to remember their work by heart.
The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to more than one. Also, 'work is. Only one or two task' is fragmented and corrected for clarity. 'Remember their work in band' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remember their work by heart'.
× I think it depends. For example some, some for example some people's work is. Only one or two task to to do in the following day and other guys maybe they just like remember their work in band.
✓ I think it depends. For example, some people's work involves only one or two tasks to do in the following day, and other people maybe just like to remember their work by heart.
The phrase 'remember their work in band' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'remember their work by heart'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.
× I think it depends. For example some, some for example some people's work is. Only one or two task to to do in the following day and other guys maybe they just like remember their work in band.
✓ I think it depends. For example, some people's work involves only one or two tasks to do in the following day, and other people maybe just like to remember their work by heart.
The phrase 'other guys maybe they just like' is awkward and redundant. 'Other people maybe just like' is clearer and more appropriate in formal speech.
× I prefer to make a little on my phone and you. Because I'm carrying my phone everywhere and in my pocket, but I don't need to. Take a paper with me so it's more convenient to make list on my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere in my pocket, and I don't need to take paper with me, so it's more convenient to make a list on my phone.
The word 'little' should be 'list'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list' to be grammatically correct. Articles are necessary before countable nouns.
× I prefer to make a little on my phone and you. Because I'm carrying my phone everywhere and in my pocket, but I don't need to. Take a paper with me so it's more convenient to make list on my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I carry my phone everywhere in my pocket, and I don't need to take paper with me, so it's more convenient to make a list on my phone.
The phrase 'and you' is unnecessary and confusing in this context and was removed. Also, 'I'm carrying' was changed to 'I carry' for present simple tense consistency.