Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Well, sometimes it depends on what I want to buy. If I want to buy something in particular, I just write them down on the list and then I will go shopping. However, when I just go to the supermarket. I'm. Uh, by the things. Just to.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Well, surely I make a list for myself at work because it's official and care Remember Me to do whatever I want. So it's really helpful and I can use it. I want to share all those things with you.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, many people don't like making lists because they think it's just stressful if they don't complete the task on time. So they want to they just want to make a list and this so they they just remember by themselves and they.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Well for me, I prefer writing the list down on paper rather than using phone to to memorize it because I think. Uh, I can't. Be repeated under. And I can be remembered.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议回答时保持句子完整,避免语气词和停顿,使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Sometimes I make a list when I shop, especially if I need specific items. However, if I just go to the supermarket casually, I usually buy things spontaneously without a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,缺乏具体细节。建议直接回答问题,使用清晰的句子结构,并提供具体原因或例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks and ensures I don't forget important duties. It definitely improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱,缺乏逻辑连贯性。建议简洁明了地表达观点,使用连接词,并给出具体原因。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed when tasks are not completed on time. Therefore, they prefer to remember things naturally without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,明确表达偏好并说明原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing by hand helps me remember things better and reduces distractions.
× If I want to buy something in particular, I just write them down on the list and then I will go shopping.
✓ If I want to buy something in particular, I just write it down on the list and then I will go shopping.
这里的 'something' 是单数,代词应使用单数形式 'it',而不是复数 'them'。
× However, when I just go to the supermarket. I'm. Uh, by the things. Just to.
✓ However, when I just go to the supermarket, I just buy the things.
原句断句不完整,缺少谓语动词,导致句子结构错误。应将断句合并,补充完整谓语,使句子通顺。
× Well, surely I make a list for myself at work because it's official and care Remember Me to do whatever I want.
✓ Well, surely I make a list for myself at work because it's official and helps me remember to do whatever I want.
原句中 'care Remember Me' 词序和用词错误,应改为 'helps me remember',正确使用动词和代词。
× So it's really helpful and I can use it. I want to share all those things with you.
✓ So it's really helpful and I can use it. I want to share all those things with you.
此处句子本身无明显语法错误,但上下文衔接不够自然,可根据语境调整。此处保持原句。
× Well, many people don't like making lists because they think it's just stressful if they don't complete the task on time. So they want to they just want to make a list and this so they they just remember by themselves and they.
✓ Well, many people don't like making lists because they think it's just stressful if they don't complete the task on time. So they just want to remember by themselves without making a list.
原句重复且句子未完成,导致表达不清晰。应简化句子,去除重复部分,使表达完整。
× Well for me, I prefer writing the list down on paper rather than using phone to to memorize it because I think. Uh, I can't. Be repeated under. And I can be remembered.
✓ Well, for me, I prefer writing the list down on paper rather than using my phone to memorize it because I think I can't remember it well otherwise.
原句中 'using phone to to memorize it' 结构不正确,缺少冠词且表达不清晰。应加冠词 'my' 并调整表达,使句子通顺且符合习惯用法。