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Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I make a list when I go out for shopping because it helps me remember the things that I will buy. It keeps me from spending too much money. So I usually go out and write down on the paper before I go.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I just make a list for my work because it helps me remember the work that I'm going to do. For example last wish I won't now everything I work for the weekend we save me time and help me a lot of in my shop.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Yes, I make a list when I go out for something because it helps me remember the things that I will buy. It keeps me from spending too much money, so I go out and write down a paper before I go.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because it helps me remember the taste that I'm going to buy an I don't need to carry a paper to go out, I just need a phone.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves money. Therefore, I usually write everything down on a piece of paper before I leave the house.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trình bày câu trả lời mạch lạc, sử dụng câu đơn giản và chính xác, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me remember my tasks. For example, last week I wrote down all the things I needed to do over the weekend, which saved me time and helped me stay organized.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời sai câu hỏi và lặp lại câu trả lời trước đó. Bạn cần trả lời đúng câu hỏi và đưa ra lý do cụ thể tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách. Hãy luyện tập trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và phát triển ý rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to shop spontaneously. Additionally, they might feel that lists limit their choices or creativity.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ dùng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'taste' thay vì 'things'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I don't have to carry a paper. Also, I can easily add or remove items whenever I want.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I make a list when I go out for shopping because it helps me remember the things that I will buy.

Yes, I make a list when I go out shopping because it helps me remember the things that I will buy.

The phrase 'go out for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go out shopping' without 'for'. This is a common error in preposition usage (related to problem type 11), but since the instruction is to correct only based on the provided list, and 'Present tense issue' fits better here due to verb form, we classify it as such. The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund 'shopping' to indicate the activity.

Present tense issue

× So I usually go out and write down on the paper before I go.

So I usually go out and write it down on paper before I go.

The phrase 'write down on the paper' is awkward and incomplete. The correct phrase is 'write it down on paper'. Also, 'on paper' is the correct prepositional phrase here. This is a present tense usage issue because the verb phrase needs to be correctly formed to express habitual action.

Past tense issue

× For example last wish I won't now everything I work for the weekend we save me time and help me a lot of in my shop.

For example, last week I wrote down everything I worked on for the weekend; it saved me time and helped me a lot in my shop.

The original sentence contains multiple errors: 'last wish' should be 'last week' (spelling), 'I won't now' is incorrect and should be 'I wrote down', 'I work' should be 'I worked', 'we save me time' should be 'it saved me time', and 'help me a lot of' should be 'helped me a lot'. These are past tense issues because the actions happened in the past and require past tense verbs.

Present tense issue

× Yes, I make a list when I go out for something because it helps me remember the things that I will buy.

Yes, I make a list when I go out for something because it helps me remember the things that I will buy.

This sentence is correct in present tense usage; no correction needed.

Present tense issue

× It keeps me from spending too much money, so I go out and write down a paper before I go.

It keeps me from spending too much money, so I go out and write it down on paper before I go.

Similar to a previous correction, 'write down a paper' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'write it down on paper'. This is a present tense issue related to verb phrase construction.

Present tense issue

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it helps me remember the taste that I'm going to buy an I don't need to carry a paper to go out, I just need a phone.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because it helps me remember the things that I'm going to buy and I don't need to carry paper when I go out; I just need my phone.

The word 'taste' is incorrect here; it should be 'things'. Also, 'carry a paper' is incorrect; 'carry paper' or 'carry a piece of paper' is correct. The conjunction 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. These are present tense and word choice issues affecting clarity and correctness.

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