Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make a list when I shop because it is really time consuming for me. Moreover, I more prefer to shop randomly, which means that I don't need to have any detailed list. So I can. Have freely decissions.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will make a list for my work because. I can allocate my time and finish my work more effectively. Also I can ensure that I don't miss any important task. Overall it is really work for me and improve my positivity.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making list because there were fewer restrictive. Buy this rigid timetable. So it will produce a lot of unnecessary precious for them. Also. They were like of the freedom and flexibility.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
A more preferred to make a list on my phone. Because I can call correct the timetable when I get the unexpected task. Which is really which is more flexible than paper? Sings I need to erase. The word on the paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“more prefer”应为“prefer”,“freely decissions”应为“freely make decisions”。建议注意语法准确性,避免断句错误,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it time-consuming. I prefer to shop spontaneously, which allows me to make decisions freely without being restricted by a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有断句不连贯和语法错误,如“it is really work for me”应为“it really works for me”。建议注意句子连贯性和语法准确,表达时更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me allocate my time and complete tasks more efficiently. Also, it ensures I don't miss any important duties. Overall, it really works for me and boosts my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,如“there were fewer restrictive”应为“they feel restricted”,“produce a lot of unnecessary precious”表达不明。建议加强语法基础,使用清晰准确的表达。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by a rigid schedule. They prefer to have freedom and flexibility in their daily activities.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达混乱,如“call correct the timetable”不明确,“which is really which is more flexible than paper?”重复且不通顺。建议练习句子结构,确保表达清晰连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily update my schedule when unexpected tasks come up. This is more flexible than using paper, where erasing or changing items can be difficult.
× I more prefer to shop randomly, which means that I don't need to have any detailed list.
✓ I prefer to shop randomly, which means that I don't need to have any detailed lists.
这里 'list' 应该用复数形式 'lists',因为前面用了 'any',表示不确定的数量,通常搭配复数名词。
× So I can. Have freely decissions.
✓ So I can have free decisions.
句子结构错误,'So I can.' 和 'Have freely decissions.' 应合并为一句完整句子,且 'freely decissions' 应改为 'free decisions','freely' 是副词,修饰动词,名词前应使用形容词 'free'。
× Yes, I will make a list for my work because. I can allocate my time and finish my work more effectively.
✓ Yes, I will make a list for my work because I can allocate my time and finish my work more effectively.
句子中 'because.' 后不应有句号,应与前句连成一句完整句子。
× Also I can ensure that I don't miss any important task.
✓ Also I can ensure that I don't miss any important tasks.
'any' 后面应接复数名词 'tasks',表示不确定数量的多个任务。
× Overall it is really work for me and improve my positivity.
✓ Overall it really works for me and improves my positivity.
缺少动词 'works',且主语 'it' 与动词需保持一致,'improve' 应改为第三人称单数 'improves'。
× Some people don't like making list because there were fewer restrictive.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are less restrictive.
'making list' 应为复数 'making lists','there were fewer restrictive' 语法错误,应改为 'they are less restrictive','fewer' 用于可数名词,'less' 用于不可数形容词。
× Buy this rigid timetable.
✓ By this rigid timetable.
'Buy' 是动词,意思是购买,句中应为介词 'By',表示方式。
× So it will produce a lot of unnecessary precious for them.
✓ So it will produce a lot of unnecessary pressure for them.
'precious' 是形容词,句中应为名词 'pressure',表示压力。
× Also. They were like of the freedom and flexibility.
✓ Also, they like the freedom and flexibility.
句子结构错误,'were like of' 不正确,应为 'like',且 'Also.' 后应用逗号连接。
× Some people don't like making list because there were fewer restrictive.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are less restrictive.
重复纠正,确保 'lists' 复数形式,且 'they are less restrictive' 语法正确。
× A more preferred to make a list on my phone.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.
'A more preferred' 语法错误,应为主语 'I' 和动词 'prefer'。
× Because I can call correct the timetable when I get the unexpected task.
✓ Because I can correct the timetable when I get an unexpected task.
'call correct' 语法错误,应去掉 'call';'the unexpected task' 应为 'an unexpected task'。
× Which is really which is more flexible than paper?
✓ This is really more flexible than paper.
句子结构混乱,应改为完整句子,去掉重复部分。
× Sings I need to erase. The word on the paper.
✓ Since I need to erase the words on the paper.
'Sings' 拼写错误,应为 'Since';句子应连贯,去掉句号,'word' 应为复数 'words'。