List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list because I like to buy things that catch my eye. However, sometimes I do make a list to remember important items so I don't forget them.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱，语法错误多，表达不连贯。建议先明确回答是否做工作清单，然后说明理由，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to do tasks as I feel like. This approach works for me because it fits my lifestyle.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且难以理解。建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并用具体原因支持。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes up their free time. Also, lists remind them of tasks they have to complete, which can be stressful.

Gợi ý: 表达较为混乱，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议简洁表达偏好，并说明原因，使用连贯句子。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I can add items anytime, and I won't lose the list like I might with paper.

× Not that I'm not the person.

✓ Not that I'm that kind of person.

这里的表达不正确，应该用"that kind of person"来表达“那种人”，而不是"the person"。"the person"指特定的人，不符合语境。

× I just love to buy that something catch my eyes so and I think it time westing to make a list,

✓ I just love to buy things that catch my eyes, so I think it's a waste of time to make a list,

"that something catch my eyes"结构不正确，应该用复数名词"things"和关系代词"that"引导定语从句。"time westing"拼写错误，应为"wasting time"，且表达顺序应为"a waste of time"。

× but sometimes I also met some list to there's some important to see.

✓ but sometimes I also meet some lists because there are some important things to see.

"met some list to there's some important to see"语法混乱，"met"应为"meet"，"list"应为复数"lists"，"to"用法错误，应改为"because"，"there's"应为复数"there are"，"important"后应加名词"things"。

× I have to buy to avoid forget.

✓ I have to buy them to avoid forgetting.

缺少宾语，"buy"后应加宾语"them"，"forget"应使用动名词形式"forgetting"。

× I think said. I'm not sure Lee medalist list from my work.

✓ I think so. I'm not sure I really make a list for my work.

"said"用法错误，应为"so"。"Lee medalist list"拼写错误，应为"really make a list"。

× You know that I'm the kind of person who just does whatever I feel like and I think it makes a lifestyle for me and I think that is really useful for my work.

✓ You know that I'm the kind of person who just does whatever I feel like, and I think it suits my lifestyle and is really useful for my work.

"makes a lifestyle"表达不当，应为"suits my lifestyle"。句子需要逗号分隔。

× Do that fee by that way I can do it ever.

✓ By doing that, I can do it better.

句子结构混乱，"Do that fee by that way"无意义，应改为"By doing that"，"do it ever"应为"do it better"。

× It cause notice people had some work to do in the other life so think that Michael List is very.

✓ It causes some people to notice they have some work to do in their life, so they think that making a list is very...

"It cause notice people had"语法错误，"cause"应为"causes"，"notice"应为不定式"to notice"，"had"应为现在时"have"，"other life"应为"their life"。

× Rest of time for and if we met medalist it means they have to do.

✓ It wastes their time, and if we make a list, it means they have to do it.

"Rest of time for"表达错误，应为"wastes their time"。"met medalist"拼写错误，应为"make a list"。

× They have to do it so they. Roll it on like.

✓ They have to do it, so they just put it off.

"Roll it on like"表达不清，应为"put it off"表示拖延。

× I do prefer to make a list on my phone that notice almost almost everyone has a phone by his or her side and I think that Michael is on my phone.

✓ I do prefer to make a list on my phone because almost everyone has a phone by their side, and I think that making a list on my phone is convenient.

"that notice"应为"because"，"Michael"应为"making a list"，"his or her"可简化为"their"。

× I can say it. Every time that I want, but if I write or pepper that I might last date.

✓ I can add to it every time I want, but if I write on paper, I might lose it.

"say it"应为"add to it"，"pepper"拼写错误，应为"paper"，"last date"应为"lose it"。