List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse different stores and choose items spontaneously. This way, I feel less restricted and can pick my favourite things more freely.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making lists helps you, using linking words to connect ideas. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage will make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work, especially when I have many tasks. It helps me feel organised because I can check off items as I complete them, which motivates me to keep going.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words. Use specific vocabulary and correct grammar to express your ideas more effectively.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they have good memories or strong self-control. Therefore, they prefer to remember and organise tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary and correct sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because I find it clearer and easier to see everything at once. Writing by hand also helps me remember tasks better.

× I will say no because I've always feel restricted while making a list for buying something.

✓ I will say no because I always feel restricted while making a list for buying something.

The phrase 'I've always feel' incorrectly mixes present perfect ('I've') with the base form 'feel'. The correct present tense form is 'I always feel'. This maintains subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.

× I just want to spend tenuously.

✓ I just want to spend freely.

The word 'tenuously' is incorrectly used here; it means 'weakly' or 'uncertainly', which does not fit the context. The intended meaning is likely 'freely' or 'without restriction'.

× Wondering other grocery shops and pick my favorite things and what I want.

✓ I like wandering around other grocery shops and picking my favourite things and what I want.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper verb forms. Adding 'I like' and using gerunds 'wandering' and 'picking' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically complete.

× Yes definitely making less when I'm more OK or starting just make me feel organized and I like the feeling of.

✓ Yes, definitely making lists when I have more to do or when I start just makes me feel organised, and I like that feeling.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper quantifiers and verb agreement. 'Making less' is likely a typo for 'making lists'. Also, subject-verb agreement is corrected with 'makes'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Check it off the list when I've done the things.

✓ I check items off the list when I've done them.

The original sentence lacks a subject and uses 'the things' awkwardly. Adding 'I' as subject and replacing 'the things' with 'them' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× There are many reasons why I think.

✓ I think there are many reasons.

The original sentence has an awkward word order and unnecessary 'why'. Reordering the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× First up, people have good memories or they have a good things of self-control.

✓ First, people have good memories or good self-control.

'A good things' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'self-control' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× They tend to not to make list because it can or remember an organize all those things in your mind and just load.

✓ They tend not to make lists because they can remember and organise all those things in their mind and it is less of a load.

The phrase 'tend to not to make list' is incorrect; 'tend not to make lists' is correct. Also, 'make list' should be plural 'make lists'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Are you suppose a disk both to sign off NASA to make list?

✓ Are you supposed to use both paper and phone to make lists?

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'Are you suppose a disk both to sign off NASA' is nonsensical. The correction assumes the intended meaning and corrects pronouns and verb forms accordingly.

× But I will say I like to use paper to make a list all I think it's quite clear one I'm making a list on the paper then on the phone.

✓ But I will say I like to use paper to make a list because I think it's much clearer when I'm making a list on paper than on the phone.

The original sentence has unclear quantifiers and awkward phrasing. 'All I think it's quite clear one' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects quantifier usage.