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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Oh yeah, of course. Almost every time I go to supermarket or a convenience store, I make a list and write down what I want to buy.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Oh yes, I will make a list for my work. It can help me to recognize what is the most important thing I have to do and I will do it first.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think maybe pig, maybe people think making list. Can let them have a few of stressful.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry my phone everywhere and. And if I make at least on paper, sometimes maybe I will, I will lose it is missing.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答比较自然,但有些语法错误和表达不够简洁。建议注意冠词的使用,如在'supermarket'前加上'the',并避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list whenever I go to the supermarket or a convenience store to ensure I don't forget anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但表达稍显生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意时态一致性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me identify the most important tasks, so I can prioritize and complete them first.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和词汇错误较多,影响理解。建议先理清思路,使用完整句子表达观点,并解释原因。

Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it stressful or feel it limits their flexibility.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用连贯的连接词。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, whereas paper lists can easily get lost.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Almost every time I go to supermarket or a convenience store, I make a list and write down what I want to buy.

Almost every time I go to the supermarket or a convenience store, I make a list and write down what I want to buy.

这里缺少定冠词“the”,因为“supermarket”是特指的场所,应该用“the supermarket”。这是冠词使用错误,属于单复数问题中的冠词错误。

Future tense issue

× Oh yes, I will make a list for my work.

Oh yes, I make a list for my work.

这里描述的是习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时而不是将来时。将来时“will make”不符合语境。

Sentence structure errors

× It can help me to recognize what is the most important thing I have to do and I will do it first.

It can help me recognize what the most important thing I have to do is, and I do it first.

句子结构不够清晰,‘recognize what is the most important thing’的语序应调整为‘recognize what the most important thing is’。此外,后半句用一般现在时更合适,因为描述习惯行为。

Sentence structure errors

× I think maybe pig, maybe people think making list. Can let them have a few of stressful.

I think maybe some people think making a list can reduce their stress.

原句语序混乱,缺少主语和谓语,且“pig”应为“people”,“have a few of stressful”表达错误,应改为“reduce their stress”。需要调整句子结构使其通顺。

Singular and plural issue

× I think maybe pig, maybe people think making list.

I think maybe some people think making a list.

“making list”缺少冠词“a”,应为“making a list”。

Sentence structure errors

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry my phone everywhere and. And if I make at least on paper, sometimes maybe I will, I will lose it is missing.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can carry my phone everywhere. And if I make one on paper, sometimes I might lose it.

句子中断且重复,“make at least on paper”应为“make one on paper”,“lose it is missing”表达错误,应简化为“lose it”。需要调整句子结构使其通顺。

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