Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes. I sometimes I go to shopping I will tap Sir all I need in my phone and it can make me make sure about. I will not forget some important items I want to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes. I make A to do list a once a week. It can. Oh, make me followed my. Of. Project process. And really help a lot of for me. Two finished.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people don't like making plans because they are single. Making plans in two complicated such as you must organize also detail and the play and subtend programmed same preferred to be a spontaneous and rather than follows Stringer tense.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on phone stare because there are a lot of apps. Remember uh nowadays and say well send notifications before deadlines coming. Is it is convenient to add some detail nodes? In to manage my daily life.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但语法和用词不够准确,句子结构混乱,影响了表达的清晰度。建议练习简单句的正确结构,避免重复和多余的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list on my phone. It helps me remember all the important items I need to buy, so I don't forget anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,影响了信息的传达。建议使用完整的句子,清晰表达观点,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list once a week. It helps me follow the progress of my projects and really helps me finish my tasks on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰,语法和词汇错误较多,导致难以理解。建议简化表达,明确观点,并使用恰当的词汇和句型。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find planning too complicated. They prefer to be spontaneous rather than follow a strict schedule.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题,影响了表达效果。建议练习使用完整句子,清晰表达理由,并使用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because there are many apps that can remind me of deadlines. It's also convenient to add detailed notes to manage my daily life.
× Yes. I sometimes I go to shopping I will tap Sir all I need in my phone and it can make me make sure about.
✓ Yes. Sometimes I go shopping. I will tap all I need into my phone, and it helps me make sure I don't forget anything.
句子结构混乱,存在多余的词语和不连贯的表达。应简化句子,去除多余的'I',并使用正确的短语'go shopping',同时调整句子使其通顺。
× I sometimes I go to shopping
✓ I sometimes go shopping
动词短语中不需要介词'to',正确表达是'go shopping',而不是'go to shopping'。
× I will tap Sir all I need in my phone
✓ I will tap all I need into my phone
动词'tap'后应使用介词'into'表示将信息输入手机,而不是'in'。
× I will not forget some important items I want to buy.
✓ I will not forget some important items I want to buy.
该句语法正确,无需修改。
× I make A to do list a once a week.
✓ I make a to-do list once a week.
冠词使用错误,'A'应为小写'a',且'once a week'中多余的'a'应去掉。
× It can. Oh, make me followed my. Of. Project process.
✓ It helps me follow my project process.
句子断断续续,缺少连贯性。应合并为完整句子,使用正确的动词形式'helps me follow'。
× And really help a lot of for me. Two finished.
✓ And it really helps me a lot to finish.
介词使用错误,'help a lot of for me'应改为'helps me a lot','Two finished'应为'to finish'。
× I think some people don't like making plans because they are single.
✓ I think some people don't like making plans because they are simple.
原句中'single'用词不当,应为'simple'表示简单,符合上下文意思。
× Making plans in two complicated such as you must organize also detail and the play and subtend programmed same preferred to be a spontaneous and rather than follows Stringer tense.
✓ Making plans is too complicated, such as you must organize all details and the plan and schedule. Some prefer to be spontaneous rather than follow a strict routine.
句子中形容词和副词使用混乱,表达不清。应使用正确的形容词'complicated',并调整句子结构使其通顺。
× Some preferred to be a spontaneous and rather than follows Stringer tense.
✓ Some prefer to be spontaneous rather than follow a stricter routine.
代词和动词形式错误,'preferred'应为'prefer','a spontaneous'应去掉冠词,'follows'应为'follow','Stringer tense'应为'stricter routine'。
× I prefer to make a list on phone stare because there are a lot of apps.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because there are a lot of apps.
介词使用错误,'on phone stare'应为'on my phone','stare'为多余词。
× Remember uh nowadays and say well send notifications before deadlines coming.
✓ Nowadays, many apps send notifications before deadlines come.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语。应调整为完整句子,表达清晰。
× Is it is convenient to add some detail nodes? In to manage my daily life.
✓ It is convenient to add some detailed notes to manage my daily life.
介词使用错误,'In to'应为'to','detail nodes'应为'detailed notes'。