Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
It depends. Sometimes if I have to shop a lot of things I will make a list. To prevent I forget about what to buy, especially when there is some party that I have to prepare the materials. But if there is just one or two items, I.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, is always work. To make a list too. RIP friend, I forgot everything and everything will be prepared Weld if. Uh, this is. I follow it.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think maybe they have a good memory task to the list is not. Useful. Not necessary, but I'm. I need to make one more step for them to before working.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Hyperthermic a list on a paper because ofl my mobile I will have another. Work to do in AIDS, so a separate paper would be more convenient for me.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够完整且有语法错误,句子结构不清晰,建议练习完整表达并注意语法,避免句子中断。
Ví dụ: I usually make a list when I have to buy many items, especially for parties, to avoid forgetting anything. However, if I only need one or two things, I don't bother making a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答混乱且含糊不清,缺乏连贯性和逻辑,建议练习清晰表达观点并使用连词连接句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me remember tasks and prepare everything on time. I find it very effective.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 表达不连贯且语法错误较多,建议练习完整句子表达原因,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and feel that lists are unnecessary. However, I prefer making lists to organize my work better.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误和语法问题,表达不清晰,建议练习正确使用词汇并简洁表达偏好。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone might distract me with other tasks. A separate paper list is more convenient for me.
× Sometimes if I have to shop a lot of things I will make a list.
✓ Sometimes if I have to shop for a lot of things, I will make a list.
这里缺少介词“for”,表示“买很多东西”,需要用“shop for”。
× To prevent I forget about what to buy, especially when there is some party that I have to prepare the materials.
✓ To prevent forgetting what to buy, especially when there is a party that I have to prepare materials for.
“prevent”后面应接动名词形式,且“prepare materials for a party”中介词“for”位置错误,需要调整。
× But if there is just one or two items, I.
✓ But if there are just one or two items, I don't make a list.
句子不完整,缺少谓语动词,且“one or two items”应使用复数形式,主谓一致。
× Yes, is always work.
✓ Yes, it always works.
缺少主语“it”,动词“work”需加第三人称单数形式“works”。
× To make a list too.
✓ I make a list too.
句子缺少主语和谓语,需补充完整。
× RIP friend, I forgot everything and everything will be prepared Weld if.
✓ Sorry, I forgot everything, but everything will be prepared well if I follow the list.
句子不通顺,表达不完整,需调整语序和用词使其通顺。
× Uh, this is. I follow it.
✓ Uh, this is why I follow it.
句子不完整,缺少连接词和完整表达。
× I think maybe they have a good memory task to the list is not.
✓ I think maybe they have a good memory, so the list is not necessary.
表达不清晰,需调整词语顺序和用词,使句子通顺。
× Useful. Not necessary, but I'm.
✓ It's not useful or necessary for them, but I am.
句子不完整,缺少谓语和主语,需补充完整。
× I need to make one more step for them to before working.
✓ I need to take one more step before working.
句子结构混乱,需调整词序和用词,使其符合语法。
× Hyperthermic a list on a paper because ofl my mobile I will have another.
✓ I prefer making a list on paper because on my mobile I will have other things to do.
“Hyperthermic”应为“prefer making”,“because ofl”拼写错误,应为“because on”,句子不完整,需调整。
× Work to do in AIDS, so a separate paper would be more convenient for me.
✓ Work to do in apps, so a separate paper would be more convenient for me.
“AIDS”应为“apps”,句子不完整,需调整表达。