Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, last week I wrote wrote down over there. Ingredients for the recipe I wanted to try which makes me stopping chip must quicker and more OK.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work because this helps me stay organized an swear I don't forget any important task, for example, when I have many things to do. Having a clear blend reduces my stress and likes me more productive throughout the day.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people don't like making lists because they fight is time consuming and boring. For example, they may feel that writing down every task takes too much effort and preferred to remember thing in your head. Also, some people might feel restricted by list as they limit flexibility and respond native in.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because this helps me remember things better. Writing by hand feels more personal an I can easily add most or a drawing. Also I find is less distracting than choosing my phone which offer has many notifications.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên chú ý phát âm rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items. For instance, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a new recipe I wanted to try, which made my shopping trip quicker and more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Một số từ bị sai hoặc không phù hợp như 'an swear', 'blend', 'likes me' làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Hãy sử dụng các từ chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện ý rõ ràng.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks. For example, when I have many things to do, having a clear plan reduces my stress and makes me more productive throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng, tránh lỗi sai và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý rõ ràng.
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. For example, they may feel that writing down every task takes too much effort and prefer to remember things in their heads. Also, some people might feel restricted by lists as they limit flexibility and spontaneity.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Một số từ bị sai như 'an', 'most', 'choosing' làm câu khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ phù hợp để diễn đạt ý rõ ràng và mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me remember things better. Writing by hand feels more personal, and I can easily add notes or drawings. Also, I find it less distracting than using my phone, which often has many notifications.
× For example, last week I wrote wrote down over there.
✓ For example, last week I wrote down the ingredients for the recipe I wanted to try.
The sentence contains a repeated word 'wrote' which is a typographical error. Also, 'over there' is unclear and unnecessary. The past tense 'wrote' is correct here, but the sentence needs to be clear and concise.
× Ingredients for the recipe I wanted to try which makes me stopping chip must quicker and more OK.
✓ Ingredients for the recipe I wanted to try, which helps me stop shopping quickly and more efficiently.
The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Makes me stopping chip must quicker and more OK' is grammatically incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects verb forms and word choice.
× this helps me stay organized an swear I don't forget any important task, for example, when I have many things to do.
✓ this helps me stay organized and swear I don't forget any important task, for example, when I have many things to do.
The word 'an' should be 'and' to correctly connect the clauses. However, 'swear' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'ensure'. The correction should be: 'this helps me stay organized and ensure I don't forget any important task.'
× Having a clear blend reduces my stress and likes me more productive throughout the day.
✓ Having a clear plan reduces my stress and makes me more productive throughout the day.
'Blend' is incorrect; it should be 'plan'. 'Likes me' is incorrect; it should be 'makes me'. The verbs must agree with the subject and convey the intended meaning.
× I think some people don't like making lists because they fight is time consuming and boring.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming and boring.
'Fight' is a wrong word here; it should be 'find'. Also, 'is' should be 'it' to refer to making lists. The sentence needs correct pronoun and verb usage.
× they may feel that writing down every task takes too much effort and preferred to remember thing in your head.
✓ they may feel that writing down every task takes too much effort and prefer to remember things in their head.
'Preferred' should be 'prefer' to match the present tense. 'Thing' should be plural 'things'. 'Your' should be 'their' to agree with 'they'.
× Also, some people might feel restricted by list as they limit flexibility and respond native in.
✓ Also, some people might feel restricted by lists as they limit flexibility and spontaneity.
'List' should be plural 'lists'. 'Respond native in' is incorrect and unclear; 'spontaneity' fits the intended meaning better.
× Writing by hand feels more personal an I can easily add most or a drawing.
✓ Writing by hand feels more personal and I can easily add notes or a drawing.
'An' should be 'and'. 'Most' is incorrect; it should be 'notes'. The sentence needs correct conjunction and word choice.
× Also I find is less distracting than choosing my phone which offer has many notifications.
✓ Also, I find it less distracting than using my phone which often has many notifications.
'Is' should be 'it' to refer to writing by hand. 'Choosing' should be 'using'. 'Offer' should be 'often'. The sentence needs correct pronoun and verb usage.