Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, why should I make a list?
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Well, actually, I often make this one work. Because it can provide a. Efficiency and convenient way for me to complete my works.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because they are full.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Only silly one. Make a list on their paper or their phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且缺乏具体内容,显得有些生硬和不礼貌。建议直接回答问题,并给出理由,避免使用反问句。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答结构不清晰,语法和表达有误,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议先明确回答问题,然后用连词连接具体理由,表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and complete tasks more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答不明确且不相关,缺乏具体内容。建议给出更合理的原因,并用完整句子表达。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 回答不礼貌且含糊不清,缺乏具体信息。建议直接表达自己的偏好,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit them whenever needed.
× Because it can provide a. Efficiency and convenient way for me to complete my works.
✓ Because it can provide an efficient and convenient way for me to complete my work.
这里的'a. Efficiency and convenient way'使用不当,应该用形容词修饰名词,且'works'在此处应为不可数名词'work',表示工作任务。建议使用'an efficient and convenient way',并将'works'改为'work'。
× Because they are full.
✓ Because they are too busy.
原句'Because they are full.'结构不完整且表达不清,可能想表达'他们很忙',应改为'Because they are too busy.'以表达原因。
× Only silly one. Make a list on their paper or their phone.
✓ Only silly people make a list on their paper or their phone.
原句缺少主语和谓语,且表达不完整。应补充主语和谓语,改为'Only silly people make a list on their paper or their phone.',使句子完整且语法正确。