Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
I think. I don't. I won't make it least one shop. 'Cause. I just enjoy the time. That I don't have anything to to adjust towards the price of the things I enjoy this.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work becaused. Alisa, just like a plan, I will follow this plan and it helps me work. Mark Leone and I can finish this work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
And because I think. It's very difficult to follow the list. Completed, Completed, Lee. Because the everything will be changed, so I think they may prefer. Do things. Why the time to over?
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I don't prefer to make a list on paper off and I just want to make a list in my man. I see it more flexible. And I don't want to spend more time on it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法和表达存在较多错误,建议练习简单句型的正确使用,并且回答时注意逻辑连贯性。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I like to enjoy the experience without worrying about prices.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,建议加强句子结构练习,使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it acts like a plan. I follow it carefully, and it helps me complete my tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱,缺乏逻辑和连贯性,建议多练习表达原因时的句型和连接词使用。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to follow them, especially when plans change frequently.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用不准确,表达不清晰,建议练习表达偏好时的句型和词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more flexible and saves time compared to paper lists.
× I don't. I won't make it least one shop.
✓ I don't. I won't make a list when I shop.
这里的'make it least one shop'是不正确的表达,应该是'make a list',表示制作购物清单。'won't'是正确的情态动词用法,但后面的短语需要修正。
× 'Cause. I just enjoy the time. That I don't have anything to to adjust towards the price of the things I enjoy this.
✓ Because I just enjoy the time and I don't have to adjust to the price of the things I enjoy.
原句结构混乱,断句不合理,且有重复的'to'。需要合并句子,使其表达清晰连贯。
× I don't have anything to to adjust towards the price of the things I enjoy this.
✓ I don't have to adjust to the price of the things I enjoy.
动词'adjust'后应接介词'to',而不是'towards'。此外,'to to'重复,应删除多余的'to'。
× Yes, I always make a list for my work becaused. Alisa, just like a plan, I will follow this plan and it helps me work.
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it is just like a plan. I will follow this plan and it helps me work.
'becaused'是错误的单词,应为'because'。句子中断句不当,需调整使句子完整通顺。
× Mark Leone and I can finish this work.
✓ I can finish this work on time.
'Mark Leone'可能是误听或拼写错误,且句子结构不完整。根据上下文,表达按时完成工作更合适。
× And because I think. It's very difficult to follow the list. Completed, Completed, Lee.
✓ Because I think it's very difficult to complete the list.
句子断裂且重复'Completed',应合并为完整句子,表达完成清单的困难。
× Because the everything will be changed, so I think they may prefer.
✓ Because everything will change, I think they may prefer not to make lists.
'the everything'错误,'everything'不需要冠词。'will be changed'被动语态不合适,改为主动语态。'so'和'because'同时使用冗余,去掉'so'。
× Do things. Why the time to over?
✓ Do things when the time is over.
原句不完整且语法错误,'Why the time to over'应为'when the time is over',表示时间结束时做事。
× I don't prefer to make a list on paper off and I just want to make a list in my man.
✓ I don't prefer to make a list on paper and I just want to make a list on my phone.
'on paper off'错误,应为'on paper'。'in my man'应为'on my phone',表示在手机上制作清单。
× I see it more flexible. And I don't want to spend more time on it.
✓ I see it as more flexible and I don't want to spend more time on it.
'see it more flexible'缺少介词'as',应为'see it as more flexible'。连接词'And'改为小写连接句子更自然。