List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够连贯，建议注意句子结构，避免断句过短，使用连词使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the small things I need. Moreover, if I have many items to buy, I always list everything to avoid forgetting anything.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和断句问题，建议使用完整句子并用连词连接，使表达更清晰自然。

Ví dụ: I usually make a list for my work because I need to remember many small tasks. Sometimes I forget things when I concentrate, so the list really helps me stay organized.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连词连接句子，使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it's not very important and it takes too much time. They prefer to remember things in their minds instead.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免断句，使用连词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to check and update them anytime. Also, I can easily add or revise notes on my phone.

× I really make a list when I shop because I usually buy. Little things I need.

✓ I really make a list when I shop because I usually buy little things I need.

句子中“buy”和“Little things I need”之间不应有句号，导致句子结构不完整。应将两部分合并成一个完整句子。

× If today I need to buy abundance things, I will list all the things I need to purchase.

✓ If today I need to buy abundant things, I will list all the things I need to purchase.

“abundance”是名词，表示“丰富”，但此处需要形容词“abundant”来修饰“things”。

× Are usually make a list for my work, because my work need to remember many little things.

✓ I usually make a list for my work because my work needs to remember many little things.

句首缺少主语“I”，且“my work”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“needs”。

× I usually forget it when I concentrating.

✓ I usually forget it when I am concentrating.

“when I concentrating”缺少助动词“am”，应为现在进行时态。

× Furthermore, it really work.

✓ Furthermore, it really works.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“works”。

× I think some people don't like making list because it is. Not really important and also caused a lot of time to do lists.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it is not really important and also causes a lot of time to make lists.

“making list”应为复数“making lists”；“caused”时态错误，应为现在时“causes”；“to do lists”表达不自然，改为“to make lists”。

× They prefer to remember in mind.

✓ They prefer to remember things in their mind.

“remember”后应有宾语，且“in mind”前应加物主代词“their”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient to remember things and also check list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient to remember things and also to check the list on my phone.

“check list”缺少冠词“the”，且“also”后应加不定式“to check”保持平行结构。

× Anne on phones I can also do. Additional things to revise it or attack additional note.

✓ And on phones, I can also do additional things to revise it or add additional notes.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词“and”，且“attack additional note”表达错误，应为“add additional notes”。