Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Is I always make a list when I show up. Making a list is a useful way for me to remember what I really need to buy, and it keeps me from spending too much time and money. I always write it down before I go shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work. It can help me stay organized and manage my time better. I always use a digital app that reminds me about tasks. I really enjoyed checking things off or on the list.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making lids because it takes too much time and they believe they have ability to make things useful by themselves. In addition, they prefer to flexible working rather than following a strict apply.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because I'm enjoying the feeling of writing things down in the paper and it is a very good. Feeling of food? Checking things off on the list. So I prefer to make a list on paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误,如“Is I always make a list”应为“I always make a list”。建议注意主谓一致和时态的正确使用。此外,回答较为重复,可以更简洁自然地表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from overspending.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但最后一句表达不够自然,“checking things off or on the list”应为“checking things off the list”。建议注意用词准确,避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time efficiently. I use a digital app that reminds me of tasks, and I enjoy checking items off the list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误,如“lids”应为“lists”,“apply”应为“plan”。句子结构不够清晰,建议加强语法基础,使用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time and they prefer to work flexibly rather than following a strict plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不连贯和无意义的句子,如“Feeling of food?”,影响表达效果。建议注意句子连贯性和逻辑性,避免无关内容。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down and checking them off, which makes me feel more organized.
× Is I always make a list when I show up.
✓ I always make a list when I show up.
句子中使用了错误的主语形式“Is I”,正确的主语应该是“I”。这是代词使用错误,主语人称和形式不匹配。
× Some people don't like making lids because it takes too much time and they believe they have ability to make things useful by themselves.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time and they believe they have the ability to make things useful by themselves.
原句中“lids”应为“lists”,是拼写错误,属于代词或词汇使用错误。并且“have ability”缺少冠词“the”,需要加上。
× In addition, they prefer to flexible working rather than following a strict apply.
✓ In addition, they prefer flexible working rather than following a strict schedule.
“prefer to flexible working”结构错误,动词prefer后面直接跟动名词或名词,不用to。且“apply”用词错误,应为“schedule”或“plan”。
× I prefer to make a list on paper because I'm enjoying the feeling of writing things down in the paper and it is a very good. Feeling of food? Checking things off on the list.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down on paper and it is very good. I like checking things off on the list.
“I'm enjoying”时态不合适,表达习惯用一般现在时“enjoy”。“in the paper”应为“on paper”,介词使用错误。句子“Feeling of food?”不通顺,应删除或改写。