List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，表达不自然。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并用连接词使回答更流畅。例如，先说明不喜欢列购物清单的原因，然后补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things as I need them. For example, I often just pick one or two items spontaneously, so making a list seems unnecessary for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，且内容不够具体。建议用清晰的句子表达是否制作工作清单及其效果，并用连接词说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work with detailed tasks for each week. However, sometimes I delay completing some tasks, so the list doesn't always help me stay on schedule.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不相关且表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，说明为什么有些人不喜欢列清单，并用具体理由支持观点。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive or time-consuming. For instance, they may prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a fixed plan.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子说明偏好，并用连接词解释原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient to carry it everywhere. Also, paper lists can be easily lost, so using my phone helps me check my list anytime.

× Actually I don't like making a list. Because I think it's useless for me.

✓ Actually, I don't like making a list because I think it's useless for me.

The sentence 'Because I think it's useless for me.' is a sentence fragment and cannot stand alone. It should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence.

× So every time I buy new things, just one or two goods that's I think you make less is not useful.

✓ So every time I buy new things, just one or two items that I think you buy less are not useful.

The phrase 'goods that's' is incorrect; 'goods' is plural and should be followed by 'that are' instead of 'that's'. Also, 'make less' is incorrect in this context; 'buy less' fits better.

× I will make a shadow. With detailed information for every week that it don't work because sometimes I will delay some peer rid of working so it's failed.

✓ I will make a schedule with detailed information for every week, but it doesn't work because sometimes I delay some parts of the work, so it fails.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Make a shadow' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'make a schedule'. Also, 'it don't work' should be 'it doesn't work' for subject-verb agreement.

× With detailed information for every week that it don't work because sometimes I will delay some peer rid of working so it's failed.

✓ With detailed information for every week, it doesn't work because sometimes I delay some parts of the work, so it fails.

The phrase 'it don't work' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it doesn't work' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Firstly, most of people don't have the quality of employment.

✓ Firstly, most people don't have the quality of employment.

The phrase 'most of people' is incorrect; 'most people' is the correct form without 'of' when referring to people in general.

× Let me use their will delight doing a lot of things and making a shadow is useless for them.

✓ Let me say they will enjoy doing a lot of things, and making a schedule is useless for them.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and phrases. 'Their will delight' is incorrect; 'they will enjoy' is appropriate. Also, 'making a shadow' should be 'making a schedule'.

× Because they were the ladies, period working.

✓ Because they are lazy and avoid working.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect words. 'They were the ladies' is likely a mishearing of 'they are lazy'. 'Period working' is unclear and likely incorrect.

× Well, I like making a shadow on my phone.

✓ Well, I like making a schedule on my phone.

'Making a shadow' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'making a schedule'.

× Is more convenient to take a phone everywhere? That use use a paper account.

✓ It is more convenient to take my phone everywhere than to use a paper account.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Is more convenient to take a phone everywhere?' is a question fragment and should be a statement. 'That use use a paper account' is unclear and likely a mishearing.

× Carry it everywhere because it might be loosed.

✓ Carrying it everywhere is inconvenient because it might be lost.

'Loosed' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'lost'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by using 'Carrying it everywhere is inconvenient'.

× And every time I want check the shed.

✓ And every time I want to check the schedule.

The phrase 'want check' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'shed' is likely a mishearing of 'schedule'.