Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like listening to others singing?

Thí sinh

Of course I like to listen others sing because I think through their singing you can feel their emotions, their stories and after listening it you can know what have this person come through. And this is the story I would like to know.

Giám khảo

Have you ever taken a singing class?

Thí sinh

No I haven't take a singing class before but I would like to because sometimes I when I'm singing I feel like I have more space to improve. So I would like to find a professional teacher to teach me how can I improve.

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

Yes, I really like to sing because I can see through the lyrics. Through the lyrics I can find a lot of stories behind the singer or the songwriter, so I like to know stories, so I like to sing.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

Nope, but I don't think learning is that important for me. Seeing it just is a way for me to express my emotions and let others know about my stories. So I won't think that learning to sing is very important.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

I would like to sing for myself because as I just mentioned, I like to sing because of the lyrics and the stories. So I want others to know my stories through my voice. So this is the this is the reason why I want to sing for myself.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Of course, I think through singing you can convey your emotions to other people. When you are singing some happy songs, you can convey the happy happiness to others. So I think through singing and through the lyrics you can convey your emotions to others.

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Part 1

Do you like listening to others singing?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain what you enjoy about listening. Use the correct structure “listen to someone sing,” and avoid the awkward phrase “what have this person come through.” Give one specific detail, such as how a singer’s voice or lyrics reveal their experiences, and avoid repeating the idea of wanting to know the story.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing because their voices can express emotions that are hard to put into words. The lyrics often give me a glimpse into the singer’s experiences, which makes the song more meaningful.

Have you ever taken a singing class?

Điểm: 57.0

Gợi ý: Use the present perfect correctly: “I haven’t taken.” Remove the hesitation “sometimes I when,” and say “there’s room for improvement.” Follow the direct answer with a brief reason and use statement word order in an indirect question: “how I can improve.”

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t taken a singing class, but I’d like to try one. I feel there’s plenty of room for improvement, and a professional teacher could help me develop better breathing and pitch control.

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 59.0

Gợi ý: The phrase “see through the lyrics” is unnatural here; use “understand” or “discover stories through the lyrics.” Avoid repeating “through the lyrics” and “I like to.” Explain briefly how singing the words makes the stories meaningful to you.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because the lyrics often tell compelling stories. When I sing them, I can connect with the emotions behind the songwriter’s words, which makes the experience more meaningful for me.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 53.0

Gợi ý: Clarify the distinction between taking lessons and learning informally. Correct “Seeing it” to “Singing,” and avoid repeating that learning is not important. You can explain that singing is mainly a personal way to express yourself, while acknowledging that lessons might still help.

Ví dụ: I haven’t had any formal singing lessons. For me, singing is mainly a way to express my feelings and share personal stories, so becoming technically perfect isn’t a priority. Still, I might take lessons one day just for fun.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer gives two different audiences: yourself and other people. Choose one as the main answer or explain how both fit together. Remove repeated phrases such as “this is the reason,” and add a specific context, such as singing alone at home or sharing a song with friends.

Ví dụ: I’d mainly sing for myself, because it helps me express my feelings and enjoy the lyrics. I’d also be happy to share a song with close friends so they could understand the stories that matter to me.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear yes-or-no answer, then support it with a specific example or effect. Avoid repeating “convey your emotions” and replace “happy happiness” with “joy” or “a cheerful mood.” You could also mention that singing together can make people feel connected.

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can definitely make people happier. An upbeat song can lift someone’s mood, and singing together at a concert or party can help people feel connected. Music can also be comforting when someone is feeling low.

Ngữ pháp

11 - Incorrect use of prepositions

× I like to listen others sing

✓ I like to listen to others sing

The verb listen is followed by the preposition to before its object. Remember to say listen to someone or something.

11 - Incorrect use of prepositions

× after listening it

✓ after listening to it

When listen refers to hearing something, it requires the preposition to. Use listen to it, not listen it.

26 - Sentence structure errors

× what have this person come through

✓ what this person has gone through

This is an embedded question, so use statement word order: subject before auxiliary verb. Also, the natural expression is go through something. In embedded questions, say what this person has gone through, not what has this person gone through.

9 - Verb in the past participle form

× No I haven't take a singing class before

✓ No, I haven't taken a singing class before

The present perfect uses have or has followed by a past participle. The past participle of take is taken, not take.

26 - Sentence structure errors

× because sometimes I when I'm singing I feel like I have more space to improve

✓ because sometimes when I'm singing, I feel like I have more room to improve

The sentence has two competing subject openings, I and when I'm singing. Keep the time clause together and use I as the subject of the main clause: sometimes when I'm singing, I feel.

26 - Sentence structure errors

× to teach me how can I improve

✓ to teach me how I can improve

How I can improve is an embedded question, not a direct question. Embedded questions use statement word order, with the subject before the verb.

13 - Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× you can convey the happy happiness to others

✓ you can convey happiness to others

Happy is an adjective and happiness is a noun. The noun happiness already expresses the idea, so happy is unnecessary here. Use convey happiness.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Happy— Cheerful; Glad; Fortunate
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
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