Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

And not really because I justice senior in with my friend in a karaoke and you know my seeing skill is not good.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

Not duty. I'm not a professional singer, I just sing with my friends in the karaoke and practice singing costs a lot of time.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

And poverty, my mother, because you know I want you sing for my mom to convey my love.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think so. Especially some moment and like if you for the final year exam and your friends invite you to the karaoke, it relief your anxiety and stress.

Giám khảo

Do you like listening to others singing?

Thí sinh

And yeah, I think so. I just listen to Jay Chou. You know, he's probably the singer in China, and I think his music is really good.

Giám khảo

Have you ever taken a singing class?

Thí sinh

Not really, because uh, just while I say, uh, singing, practice costs a lot of time, the money I prefer to watching a football game or practice my football skill.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法和词汇多处错误,信息模糊。建议先给出直接的主题句(Like/Do not like),然后用1-2个简短的理由支持,注意时态和词汇(karaoke, singing skills, practice)。避免无意义的填充词。

Ví dụ: Not really. I don’t sing much because my singing skills are weak and I feel embarrassed. For example, when I go to karaoke with friends I prefer to listen rather than sing.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语法和词汇错误。建议先直接回答(Yes/No),然后给出具体原因或说明,例如是否上过课程、如何练习以及练习花费的时间。使用连词(because, so)连接句子。

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t learned singing formally. I’m not a professional and usually just sing casually with friends because formal lessons take a lot of time and money.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 表达混乱,词汇错误(poverty)和代词使用不当。建议直接给出对象(e.g., my mother),然后解释原因并给出具体场景。保持句子简短清楚。

Ví dụ: I would sing for my mother to show my love and gratitude. For example, I might sing at her birthday to make her feel special.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体可理解但有语法和表达错误(relief -> relieve, awkward phrasing)。建议用一到两句概括观点,再用具体例子支持,注意动词形式和连接词使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can make people happy. For example, after stressful exams my friends and I go to karaoke and singing helps relieve anxiety and lift our mood.

Do you like listening to others singing?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答比较自然但有些口语填充词(you know, probably)和不准确表述(probably the singer in China)。建议先直接回答,然后给具体细节(favorite singer, what you like about them)并减少无意义词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing. I often listen to Jay Chou because I like his melodies and lyrics; his songs are very popular in China.

Have you ever taken a singing class?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答含糊且冗长,有重复和语法错误。建议直接回答(No),接着给两个简短明确的原因(time, money, other interests),并用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t taken singing lessons. Lessons take a lot of time and money, and I prefer to spend my free time practicing football.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× And not really because I justice senior in with my friend in a karaoke and you know my seeing skill is not good.

✓ Not really, because I just sing with my friend at a karaoke, and you know my singing skill is not good.

问题类型:句子结构错误(ID:26)。原句词序混乱并且词汇使用错误(justice→just,senior in with→sing with,seeing→singing,in a karaoke→at a karaoke)。建议:先表达否定(Not really),用连词“because”引出原因,使用正确动词和介词(sing with someone, at a karaoke),并使用名词形式“singing skill”。简洁地把句子分为两部分更清楚。

Modal verb usage

× Not duty. I'm not a professional singer, I just sing with my friends in the karaoke and practice singing costs a lot of time.

✓ Not really. I'm not a professional singer. I just sing with my friends at karaoke, and practicing singing takes a lot of time.

问题类型:情态动词/用词不当(ID:4)。原句“Not duty”为拼写错误,应为“Not really”。“practice singing costs a lot of time”结构不自然,应使用动名词短语作主语并用动词takes。建议用短句分开表达,并将‘in the karaoke’改为常用表达‘at karaoke’或‘in a karaoke’改为自然用法。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Who do you want to sing for? Student: And poverty, my mother, because you know I want you sing for my mom to convey my love.

✓ I would sing for my mother, because I want to sing for her to convey my love.

问题类型:代词使用不当(ID:12)。原句‘And poverty, my mother’毫无意义,疑为误说;‘I want you sing for my mom’中代词you错误,应为I,且动词需要不定式‘to sing’。建议用‘I would sing for my mother’或‘I want to sing for my mother’并用宾格代词her替代重复名词。说明感情目的时用不定式。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Yeah, I think so. Especially some moment and like if you for the final year exam and your friends invite you to the karaoke, it relief your anxiety and stress.

✓ Yeah, I think so. Especially in some moments, like when you are preparing for final exams and your friends invite you to karaoke, it relieves your anxiety and stress.

问题类型:形容词或副词使用不当(ID:13)。原句‘some moment’应为‘some moments’或‘in some moments’;‘if you for the final year exam’结构错误,应为‘when you are preparing for final exams’;动词‘relief’误作名词,应为动词‘relieve’,并需与第三人称单数主语保持一致(relieves)。建议使用完整从句(like when...)并注意单复数与动词形式一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× And yeah, I think so. I just listen to Jay Chou. You know, he's probably the singer in China, and I think his music is really good.

✓ Yeah, I think so. I just listen to Jay Chou. You know, he's probably the most famous singer in China, and I think his music is really good.

问题类型:代词/比较或程度表达不当(ID:12/25)。原句‘probably the singer in China’不完整,缺少限定词和比较级或最高级,导致意思不清。建议补充程度词,如‘the most famous singer in China’以表达比较含义,保持句子完整。

Sentence structure errors

× Not really, because uh, just while I say, uh, singing, practice costs a lot of time, the money I prefer to watching a football game or practice my football skill.

✓ Not really, because, as I said, practicing singing takes a lot of time. I prefer watching a football game or practising my football skills.

问题类型:句子结构错误(ID:26)。原句多处语序混乱和词形错误(just while I say→as I said;singing, practice costs→practicing singing takes;the money I prefer→删除多余短语;practice my football skill→practise my football skills)。建议先说明原因(as I said),用动名词短语作主语并用正确动词takes,最后用并列句表达偏好并调整名词复数和动词形式。

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Final— Last; Irrevocable; Decider
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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