Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (e.g., "passion" repeated) and correct small errors ("it it", "a hobby of mine"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it feels like home and has been my passion since childhood. For example, I used to sing in school choirs and performed at family gatherings, so singing is both a hobby and something I want to pursue professionally.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give a brief reason or plan. Use a linking word to add detail (e.g., "but" or "however"). Improve grammar: "learned" or "had lessons".

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned formally, but I'm willing to start lessons because I want to improve my technique and confidence when performing.

Gợi ý: Be specific and avoid vague or repetitive phrases. Begin with a clear topic sentence stating who you want to sing for, then give a reason. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and correct pronoun and tense usage.

Ví dụ: I would mainly like to sing for myself because it helps me express who I am, but I also hope to sing for my family and close friends so they can share in my joy.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, logical statement and support it with a reason and a specific example. Remove hesitations and filler words. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example". Choose clearer vocabulary (e.g., "comfort" instead of "conf comfortable").

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express emotions and connect with others. For example, a happy song can lift someone's mood, while a sad song can make listeners feel understood and comforted.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and give a clear reason. Avoid vague phrases like "I see myself to them"; instead explain how listening inspires you. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" and correct grammar ("listening to others sing").

Ví dụ: Yes, I love listening to other singers because they inspire me; when I hear skilled performers, I imagine improving and one day singing like them.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct grammar and add a brief, specific plan or motivation. Use linking words like "but" and "because" to connect ideas. Replace repetition with concrete details about how you would learn or help others.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken a singing class yet, but I'd like to because I want to improve my technique. I plan to enroll in weekly lessons so I can pursue my dream and eventually perform to inspire others.

× I like singing because it it feels like home for me and it became my hobby of mine.

✓ I like singing because it feels like home to me and it became my hobby.

The sentence contains redundant words and awkward adjective/adverb usage. 'it it' is a typographical repetition; remove the extra 'it'. 'home for me' is better expressed as 'home to me'. 'my hobby of mine' is redundant since 'my hobby' already indicates possession. Also 'became' is acceptable if referring to a past change, but keep tense consistent with present liking. Suggestion: remove duplicates and redundant possessives to make the sentence concise and natural.

× Also, it is my FA passion.

✓ Also, it is my passion.

'FA' appears to be an unclear or incorrect adjective. If intended to be an abbreviation, it is not standard here. Removing it leaves a grammatically correct adjective phrase 'my passion'. Suggestion: use clear adjectives or write out abbreviations if needed.

× When I was little, I started singing a lot.

✓ When I was little, I started singing a lot.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Started' is the correct past tense verb for a past action. No change required.

× Actually, no, I haven't, but I'm willing to.

✓ Actually, no, I haven't, but I'm willing to learn.

The original is mostly fine, but 'willing to' is incomplete without a verb. Add 'learn' to complete the infinitive and clarify the intended action. Suggestion: always follow 'willing to' with a verb (base form).

× Actually, I don't know, but maybe for myself, for who I was, yeah.

✓ Actually, I don't know, but maybe for myself, for who I am, yeah.

The pronoun and tense are inconsistent: 'who I was' refers to the past, but context implies singing for one's current self. Use 'who I am' to refer to the present identity. Suggestion: match pronoun references to intended time frame.

× I like the song for myself.

✓ I like to sing for myself.

'I like the song for myself' is awkward: 'like the song' suggests enjoying a specific song, while context means enjoying the act of singing for oneself. Use the infinitive 'to sing' and 'for myself' to express purpose. Suggestion: choose verbs that match intended meaning ('sing' vs 'song').

× Yes, I just don't think so I I know so singing can bring happiness to people because it expresses their emotion too not just the singer but theirs also.

✓ Yes, I know singing can bring happiness to people because it expresses their emotions, not just the singer's.

This sentence has repetition ('I I'), contradictory fragments ('I just don't think so' vs 'I know'), and unclear possessive structures. Remove contradictory clause and repetitions, use plural 'emotions' for people in general, and change 'theirs also' to 'not just the singer's' for clear possessive. Suggestion: avoid repeating words and contradictory statements; use clear possessive forms.

× And it can may fee maybe feel conf comfortable for them or bring vibes to them.

✓ It can make them feel comfortable or bring good vibes to them.

This fragment contains multiple modal/conflicting verbs ('can may'), typos ('fee', 'conf'), and informal phrasing ('bring vibes'). Use a single modal verb 'can', the verb 'make' + object + adjective ('make them feel comfortable'), and 'bring good vibes' for natural, clear expression. Suggestion: choose one modal and correct verb form; avoid typos and overly informal words in formal responses.

× Yes I do love listening other singing because I see myself to them.

✓ Yes, I do love listening to others singing because I see myself in them.

Missing preposition 'to' after 'listening' and incorrect pronoun/phrase 'other singing' should be 'others singing' or 'other people's singing'. 'See myself to them' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'see myself in them' meaning identify with them. Suggestion: use 'listening to' and the idiom 'see myself in someone'.

× Like maybe one day I became like them too.

✓ Maybe one day I will become like them too.

'Became' is past tense but the speaker means a future possibility. Use 'will become' or 'might become' to express future possibility. Suggestion: use appropriate future tense/modal to indicate future aspiration.

× I haven't take a singing class, but I love to.

✓ I haven't taken a singing class, but I would love to.

After 'haven't' (present perfect), the past participle 'taken' is required, not the base form 'take'. Also, 'I love to' is incomplete and unnatural here; 'I would love to' expresses willingness or desire to take a class. Suggestion: use correct past participle with perfect tenses and complete the phrase expressing desire.

× I'm willing to learn and also I'm willing to pursue my dream not just for myself but also for the people I can help.

✓ I'm willing to learn, and I'm willing to pursue my dream not just for myself but also for the people I can help.

Grammar is mostly correct; minor punctuation improvement by adding a comma before 'and' for clarity. The sentence uses present tense appropriately. Suggestion: add appropriate punctuation to separate clauses for clarity.