Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

Currently, I don't like singing. However, in the past, before becoming a Buddhist monk, I really like singing and I usually participate in a musical club in my schools. What was a meaningful moment in my life?

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't. I mean, I'm not a singer, that's why I don't spend time. I have never spent time, uh, learning singing. However, I could sing and I, although I don't have a, you know, nice voice, but I love singing a lot.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

Wow, let me see my religious master. I mean I would like to sing a Buddhist song to offer him. I think it's a good way for me to express my gratitude to him for what he has done for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. I think a singing is a good way to make people happy. That is why many people when they gather together to celebrate a ceremony, they usually sing together or uh. Is it a good way to relax?

Giám khảo

Do you like listening to others singing?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I mean I prefer listening to singing. I have. I don't have a good a nice voice and I am so shy to sing in front of others. So that's why I prefer listening to singing.

Giám khảo

Have you ever taken a singing class?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't. I mean I'm not a singer and in I have never joined a class music. I think I have never any opportunity to participate in this class. However, in the future if I had the chance, I would love to try.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn câu đầu (topic sentence), tránh lạc đề và câu thừa. Giải thích rõ lý do hiện không thích hát (ví dụ: mất tự tin, bận rộn, môi trường) rồi cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ bằng các liên từ (because, so, although). Giữ tối đa 4–5 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "used to", "join", "music club".

Ví dụ: I don't really like singing at the moment because I have limited free time and I feel shy performing. Although I used to enjoy singing in school, I rarely practice now because my monastic duties take up most of my day. However, I still appreciate music and sometimes hum quietly when I have free moments.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi mở rộng bằng lý do và ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh nói lặp lại và chắp vá. Dùng liên từ (however, although, because) để nối ý. Cố gắng cung cấp một chi tiết thực tế (ví dụ: tự học qua YouTube, hát lúc nào) và giới hạn số câu.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I never had the time or resources. Although I don't have a trained voice, I enjoy singing casually at home and sometimes learn songs from YouTube to improve. If I had the chance, I would consider taking lessons to get better.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời tốt: trực tiếp, cảm xúc và cụ thể. Để hoàn thiện hơn, thêm chi tiết về hoàn cảnh (khi nào, dịp gì) và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Giữ 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my religious master, especially during a ceremony or a special occasion. Singing a Buddhist song would be my way to express gratitude for his guidance and support over the years.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ (for example, because, so). Tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh và hỏi lại người kiểm tra. Mô tả cách hát tạo ra niềm vui (kết nối xã hội, giải tỏa cảm xúc).

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Singing can lift people's mood because it creates a sense of togetherness and releases stress. For example, at celebrations people often sing together, which strengthens social bonds and makes everyone feel happier.

Do you like listening to others singing?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: Trả lời rõ ràng rồi nêu lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ. Tránh ngắt quãng, dùng cấu trúc mạch lạc (because, so, therefore). Thêm cảm xúc hoặc hoàn cảnh khi thích nghe (ở nhà, trong lễ hội).

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing because I am quite shy and not confident about my own voice. For instance, I prefer listening during ceremonies or music events where I can appreciate singers without needing to perform myself.

Have you ever taken a singing class?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Trả lời thẳng rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể (lack of opportunity, time, money). Nói về khả năng trong tương lai bằng cách dùng cấu trúc điều kiện rõ ràng (If I had the chance, I would...). Hạn chế lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., "joined a music class").

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken a singing class because I never had the opportunity or enough free time. If I had the chance in the future, I would love to join a class to learn proper techniques and gain confidence.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Currently, I don't like singing. However, in the past, before becoming a Buddhist monk, I really like singing and I usually participate in a musical club in my schools.

✓ Currently, I don't like singing. However, in the past, before becoming a Buddhist monk, I really liked singing and I usually participated in a musical club at my school.

The sentence mixes present tense with past events. Use past tense 'liked' and 'participated' for actions that happened in the past. Also change 'in my schools' to 'at my school' for correct preposition and singular noun agreement. Suggestion: Keep past events consistently in past tense and use 'at' with 'school' when referring to participation in a school club.

Past tense issue

× What was a meaningful moment in my life?

✓ What was a meaningful moment in your life?

This is actually a pronoun reference error (addressing the examiner's question), but in context the student should echo the examiner's question to reflect understanding. Use 'your' instead of 'my'. Suggestion: When repeating a question or asking about someone else, use the appropriate pronoun.

Present perfect issue

× No, I haven't. I mean, I'm not a singer, that's why I don't spend time. I have never spent time, uh, learning singing.

✓ No, I haven't. I mean, I'm not a singer, so I don't spend time learning to sing. I have never spent time learning to sing.

'Learning singing' is incorrect form. Use 'learning to sing' or 'learning singing' is awkward. Also 'that's why' is acceptable but 'so' is more natural. Use present perfect 'I have never spent time' with 'learning to sing'. Suggestion: Use 'learn to sing' for the infinitive purpose and keep tense consistent.

Sentence structure errors

× However, I could sing and I, although I don't have a, you know, nice voice, but I love singing a lot.

✓ However, I can sing, and although I don't have a very nice voice, I love singing a lot.

Mixes modal 'could' (past/potential) with present meaning; use 'can' for present ability. Remove redundant conjunctions ('and' with 'but') and fix word order: 'although... I' then main clause. Suggestion: Use 'can' for current ability and keep one subordinating conjunction structure.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I mean I would like to sing a Buddhist song to offer him.

✓ I mean I would like to sing a Buddhist song for him.

'Offer him' is incorrect collocation for singing; use 'sing for him' or 'offer him a song' (less common). Suggestion: Use 'sing for someone' to indicate performing for them.

Present perfect issue

× I think it's a good way for me to express my gratitude to him for what he has done for me.

✓ I think it's a good way for me to express my gratitude to him for what he did for me.

Present perfect 'has done' is acceptable, but when referring to a specific past action it's more natural to use simple past 'did' in spoken English here. Suggestion: Use simple past when mentioning specific past actions or events.

Article errors

× Yes, definitely. I think a singing is a good way to make people happy.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think singing is a good way to make people happy.

'A singing' is ungrammatical because 'singing' as a gerund is uncountable here and does not take the indefinite article. Suggestion: Remove the article when using gerunds as general activities.

Sentence structure errors

× That is why many people when they gather together to celebrate a ceremony, they usually sing together or uh. Is it a good way to relax?

✓ That is why many people, when they gather to celebrate a ceremony, usually sing together. It is also a good way to relax.

Run-on and fragmented sentence: 'or uh. Is it a good way to relax?' is unclear. Recast into two clear sentences and remove filler. Suggestion: Separate ideas into full sentences and avoid trailing fragments.

Pronoun error

× Yes I do. I mean I prefer listening to singing. I have. I don't have a good a nice voice and I am so shy to sing in front of others.

✓ Yes, I do. I mean I prefer listening to singing. I don't have a good, nice voice and I am too shy to sing in front of others.

Remove the stray 'I have.' which is incomplete. Use 'too shy' instead of 'so shy' for naturalness, and fix double article 'a good a nice voice' to 'a good, nice voice' or simply 'a nice voice'. Suggestion: Proofread to remove incomplete fragments and redundant articles; use 'too shy' for ability-limiting adjectives.

Article errors

× No, I haven't. I mean I'm not a singer and in I have never joined a class music.

✓ No, I haven't. I mean I'm not a singer and I have never joined a music class.

Word order and article usage: 'a class music' is incorrect. Use 'a music class' or 'a singing class'. Also remove the stray 'in'. Suggestion: Use noun + class order ('music class') and include 'a' before singular countable nouns.

Sentence structure errors

× I think I have never any opportunity to participate in this class.

✓ I think I have never had the opportunity to participate in such a class.

Incorrect structure 'have never any opportunity'—in English use 'have never had the opportunity' or 'have never had any opportunity'. Also 'this class' -> 'such a class' is more natural when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use 'have never had the opportunity' for expressing lack of chance.

Conditional tense issue

× However, in the future if I had the chance, I would love to try.

✓ However, in the future if I have the chance, I would love to try.

The sentence mixes conditional forms. For a realistic future possibility, use present simple in the if-clause ('if I have the chance') with 'would' or 'would love' in the main clause. Using 'if I had' suggests an unreal or unlikely condition. Suggestion: Use 'if I have the chance' for likely future situations.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Happy— Cheerful; Glad; Fortunate
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Musical— Tuneful
Nice— Enjoyable; Pleasant; Polite; Subtle; Fine
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