Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy (verb forms, subject-verb agreement) and reduce redundancy. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax. For example, I often sing in the shower or while doing chores, which brightens my mood and clears my mind.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and spelling (singing, lessons), use clear structure: topic sentence + brief reason + future intention. Use linking words like "but" or "however" and be specific about what you would like to learn.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken formal singing lessons, although I often sing along to a couple of songs for fun. However, in the future I would like to take classes to learn breathing techniques and pitch control so singing can become an enjoyable hobby.

Gợi ý: Fix grammar and word choice (avoid, performing, yourself). Start with a direct answer and give a concise reason with linking word like "because". Be specific about situations when you prefer to sing alone.

Ví dụ: I prefer to sing for myself because I feel self-conscious about my tone. For instance, I usually practice alone at home where I can relax and experiment without feeling judged.

Gợi ý: Clarify ideas and fix vocabulary/grammar. Use linking words (for example, because, therefore) and give a specific example. Avoid vague phrases like "meaningful livelihoods."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can make people happy because uplifting melodies allow people to express emotions and improve their mood. For example, community choirs bring people together and create a strong sense of connection.

Gợi ý: Correct plural/singular and word choice (voices, styles, lifts). Give one clear supporting detail and an example. Use linking words like "for example" properly and avoid spelling errors.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy listening to others sing because I appreciate different voices and styles. For example, I like going to local concert halls to hear singers' vocal talent and the emotion in their performances.

Gợi ý: This answer is clear; improve by adding a specific plan or timeline and a linking phrase. Keep it concise and correct tense usage.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken a singing class because my work schedule is very busy at the moment. However, I plan to enroll in beginner lessons next year when I have more free time.

× I often sing when I take a shower or whenever I have free time because it helped me relax and clear my mind.

✓ I often sing when I take a shower or whenever I have free time because it helps me relax and clear my mind.

The sentence mixes present tense ('I often sing', 'I take', 'I have') with past tense 'helped'. Use present tense 'helps' to maintain consistent tense and correctly describe a habitual effect. Suggestion: keep present simple for habitual actions: 'helps'.

× Singing brighten my mood and make me feel refreshed.

✓ Singing brightens my mood and makes me feel refreshed.

The gerund phrase 'Singing' requires a singular verb form. 'Brighten' and 'make' are base forms; they must take third-person singular '-s' to agree with the singular subject. Suggestion: use 'brightens' and 'makes'.

× No, I have not taken any syncing lesson.

✓ No, I have not taken any singing lessons.

The wrong word 'syncing' (verb form) is used instead of the adjective/noun 'singing'. Also 'lesson' should be plural 'lessons' when referring generally. Suggestion: use correct word 'singing' and pluralize if general.

× I usually just sing along 2 songs and follow the resume.

✓ I usually just sing along to two songs and follow the recording.

The original lacks the preposition 'to' after 'sing along' and uses '2' instead of 'two'; 'resume' is incorrect word choice. Likely intended 'recording' or 'the music'. Suggestion: use 'sing along to two songs' and replace 'resume' with appropriate noun like 'recording' or 'track'.

× In the future if I have more free time, I would like to take listen to learn proper technique because thinking could be come and enjoyable hobby.

✓ In the future, if I have more free time, I would like to take lessons to learn proper technique because I think it could become an enjoyable hobby.

Multiple issues: 'take listen to learn' is incorrect sequence; use 'take lessons to learn' or 'listen to lessons'. 'thinking' should be 'I think', and 'could be come' should be 'could become'. 'and enjoyable hobby' missing article 'an'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms and word order: 'take lessons to learn', 'I think', 'could become an enjoyable hobby'.

× Actually I prefer to sing for myself because my voice and my tone are not very good, so I avoid thinking in front of the other people.

✓ Actually, I prefer to sing for myself because my voice and my tone are not very good, so I avoid singing in front of other people.

'thinking' is the wrong verb; likely intended 'singing'. Also 'the other people' is unnatural; 'other people' is correct. Suggestion: use correct verb and omit 'the'.

× Singing alone for you really relaxing and help me practice without feeling judged.

✓ Singing alone for me is really relaxing and helps me practice without feeling judged.

Missing auxiliary 'is' for the adjective 'relaxing' and subject-verb agreement 'help' should be 'helps' to match 'Singing alone for me'. Also 'for you' should be 'for me' given context. Suggestion: include 'is' and use third-person singular verb.

× Yes, I do thinking can make people happy because meaningful livelihoods and and uplifting melody help them express emotion and improve their mood it also brings people together when they sing in groups, creating a sense of connection and.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing can make people happy because meaningful lyrics and uplifting melodies help them express emotion and improve their mood. It also brings people together when they sing in groups, creating a sense of connection.

Run-on sentence with wrong words: 'do thinking' should be 'do. I think' or just 'I think'. 'livelihoods' is incorrect; likely 'lyrics'. Duplicate 'and and'. Missing punctuation between clauses. 'melody' should be plural 'melodies'. Sentence ended abruptly with 'and.' Suggestions: split into sentences, choose correct words ('lyrics', 'melodies'), and add proper punctuation.

× Yes of course, I really enjoy listening to other people sing because I like hearing different voice and styles and is often cheers me up.

✓ Yes, of course, I really enjoy listening to other people sing because I like hearing different voices and styles and it often cheers me up.

'voice' should be plural 'voices' to match 'different', and the clause 'is often cheers me up' is ungrammatical; use 'it often cheers me up'. Suggestion: pluralize nouns and add appropriate pronoun 'it'.

× For example, I love going to low hall concerts where I can appreciate singles talent and emotion in their perform.

✓ For example, I love going to local hall concerts where I can appreciate singers' talent and emotion in their performance.

Several word choice errors: 'low' should be 'local', 'singles' should be possessive plural 'singers'' to show their talent, and 'perform' should be 'performance'. Suggestion: correct word choices and use possessive form for plural noun.

× No, I have not taken a singing class because my work schedule is very busy and I don't have time at the moment.

✓ No, I have not taken a singing class because my work schedule is very busy and I don't have time at the moment.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.