Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your response more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix pronoun/tense errors (e.g., "because I'm an introvert" not "because of me being").

Ví dụ: I don't enjoy singing myself because I'm an introvert and feel shy performing in front of others. However, I love listening to singers because their performances are relaxing and inspiring.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer then add a concise plan or reason. Correct tense and remove redundancy (avoid repeating 'but'). Use linking words like 'however' or 'although'.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned to sing, although I'd like to take singing lessons in the future because I want to improve my confidence and technique.

Gợi ý: Keep the opening sentence direct and add one specific detail about how it would affect them. Use a linking word to connect reason and result and avoid repeating phrases like 'I would like'.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my future husband and children because it would be a personal way to express my love, and it could make family gatherings more joyful.

Gợi ý: Clarify your position clearly: state whether you think singing generally brings happiness, then support with concise reasons and examples. Fix grammar and sentence fragments, and use linking words like 'however' and 'for example'.

Ví dụ: I wouldn't say singing always makes people happy; however, at social events it often lifts the mood because it's entertaining and can express affection, for example when someone sings to a loved one.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Provide one specific example or feeling and use a linking word to connect ideas. Replace repeated phrases like 'I do' with varied vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy listening to people sing, especially when friends perform my favourite songs, because it feels personal and really uplifting.

Gợi ý: Respond with a clear statement, then give a specific plan using correct grammar and linking words. Improve phrasing (e.g., 'my partner is a musician') and avoid wordy constructions.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't had the opportunity, but since my partner is a musician and music lecturer, I plan to ask him to give me lessons so I can sing at small gatherings.

× I do not like singing for myself but I do enjoy listening to someone singing and it's because of me being an introverted and I'm a little bit shy to sing in front of people.

✓ I do not like singing myself, but I enjoy listening to someone sing because I am introverted and a little shy about singing in front of people.

Pronoun and phrase issues: 'for myself' is unnatural here; use 'myself' after 'like' or omit. 'listening to someone singing' is correct but 'listening to someone sing' is more natural. 'it's because of me being an introverted' uses incorrect pronoun/object and article; use 'because I am introverted'. Also 'introverted' needs no article. Combine clauses and adjust word order for clarity. Suggestion: Use subject pronoun 'I' with 'am' for descriptions and prefer 'listen to someone + base verb' for perception verbs.

× No, I'm afraid I'm not, but I really like to attend singing class someday in the future, but I didn't have the opportunity yet.

✓ No, I haven't, but I would really like to attend a singing class someday in the future; I haven't had the opportunity yet.

Incorrect modal/auxiliary usage: 'I'm afraid I'm not' is awkward for 'I have not'. Use 'I haven't'. Also tense inconsistency: 'didn't have the opportunity yet' should be present perfect 'I haven't had the opportunity yet' to show an experience up to now. Article missing: 'a singing class'. Suggestion: Use present perfect for experiences up to now and include appropriate articles.

× I would like to sing for my future husband and children because I think in this way I can show them how I love them and it can be entertaining too.

✓ I would like to sing for my future husband and children because I think this is a way I can show them how much I love them, and it can be entertaining too.

Pronoun and phrase choice: 'in this way I can show them how I love them' is unidiomatic. Use 'this is a way I can show them how much I love them'. Adds 'much' to clarify intensity. Also adjust word order for natural English. Suggestion: Use 'how much I love them' when expressing degree of affection.

× I don't think it necessary brings happiness to people, but it can bring happiness to gatherings.

✓ I don't think it necessarily brings happiness to people, but it can bring happiness to gatherings.

Incorrect word form: 'necessary' is an adjective but an adverb 'necessarily' is required to modify the verb 'brings'. Suggestion: Use adverbs (often ending in -ly) to modify verbs.

× It can be very entertaining and it can also be. A way of showing love to your beloved.

✓ It can be very entertaining and can also be a way of showing love to your loved ones.

Fragment and punctuation error: 'it can also be. A way...' creates a sentence fragment. Combine into one sentence and correct word choice: 'your beloved' is unnatural in this context; use 'your loved ones'. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments by ensuring each sentence has a subject and verb; use appropriate noun phrases.

× Yes, I do. I do like listening to people singing, especially when I ask my friends to sing my favorite songs for me and they do it.

✓ Yes, I do. I like listening to people sing, especially when I ask my friends to sing my favorite songs for me and they do.

Redundant auxiliary: 'I do like' is acceptable for emphasis but unnecessary here; use simple present 'I like'. Also 'listening to people singing' is acceptable but 'listening to people sing' is more natural with verbs of perception. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual likes unless emphasizing.

× No, I haven't. I didn't have the opportunity so far, but as my partner being a musician and a music lecturer, I would really like to ask him to teach me some singing lessons.

✓ No, I haven't. I haven't had the opportunity so far, but since my partner is a musician and a music lecturer, I would really like to ask him to give me some singing lessons.

Tense consistency: 'I didn't have the opportunity so far' should be present perfect 'I haven't had the opportunity so far'. Incorrect subordinate clause 'as my partner being' lacks a finite verb; use 'since my partner is'. 'Teach me some singing lessons' is awkward; say 'give me some singing lessons' or 'teach me to sing'. Suggestion: Use present perfect for experiences up to now, use complete clauses with a conjugated verb, and use natural collocations like 'give lessons' or 'teach me to sing'.