Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like singing? Why?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like singing. Singing helps improve my mood and gives me more confidence.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Thí sinh

No, I haven't because I focused on playing piano.

Giám khảo

Who do you want to sing for?

Thí sinh

I want to sing for my family because they are always supporting me.

Giám khảo

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. Singing can helps people to relieve the their stress and make them relax.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Do you like singing? Why?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且直接,但可以增加更多细节来丰富内容,例如具体说明唱歌如何改善心情和增强自信。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax after a stressful day and boosts my confidence when I perform in front of others.

Have you ever learnt how to sing?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但缺少连接词和细节,可以补充说明为什么选择钢琴而非唱歌。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing because I have been focusing on playing the piano, which requires a lot of practice and dedication.

Who do you want to sing for?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接且有理由,但可以使用连接词并增加具体细节,说明家人支持的方式。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because they have always supported me emotionally and encouraged me to pursue my interests.

Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误('can helps'应为'can help'),且表达较简单。建议注意语法并丰富内容,使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can help people relieve stress and relax because it allows them to express their emotions and enjoy music.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Singing can helps people to relieve the their stress and make them relax.

✓ Singing can help people to relieve their stress and make them relax.

在情态动词can后,动词应使用原形help,而不是第三人称单数形式helps。此处错误属于动词形式错误,正确用法是can + 动词原形。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Singing can helps people to relieve the their stress and make them relax.

✓ Singing can help people to relieve their stress and make them relax.

句中出现了重复的定冠词和物主代词“the their”,这是错误的。应去掉“the”,只保留“their”,表示“他们的压力”。

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