Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有多处发音和用词错误，例如将'singing'误说成'seeing'，且句子结构不清晰，表达不自然。建议你注意发音准确，使用正确的词汇，并且简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and makes me feel happy. It also brings joy to people around me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇错误，如将'singing'误为'seeing'，句子不连贯。建议你注意时态和句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned how to sing since primary school. My uncle, who is a great singer, taught me.

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议你简洁明了地表达，注意主谓一致和句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for people who appreciate my singing because sharing music with others makes me happy. I hope they can feel my emotions through my songs.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次出现词汇错误和句子不完整，表达不连贯。建议你使用完整句子，注意词汇的正确使用，并用具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel sad, listening to cheerful songs helps me feel better.

× I do like seeing, maybe that's because my personality is kind of outgoing and happy hot girl, so seeing him make me relax and bring happiness to everyone around me.

✓ I do like singing, maybe that's because my personality is kind of outgoing and happy, so singing makes me relax and brings happiness to everyone around me.

这里'seeing'应改为'singing'，因为题目问的是喜欢唱歌。'seeing him make me relax'中的'seeing'应为'singing'，且动词需用第三人称单数形式'makes'和'brings'，因为主语是单数的'singing'。另外，'happy hot girl'不符合语法，应去掉'hot girl'。

× Yeah, because I love seeing so I was in my primary school. I learn how to sing with my uncle She he is really great singer.

✓ Yeah, because I love singing, so when I was in primary school, I learned how to sing with my uncle. He is a really great singer.

'learn'应使用过去式'learned'，因为动作发生在过去。'was in my primary school'应改为'when I was in primary school'以表达时间状语。'She he'应分开为'He'。

× I want to sing for someone who appreciate my same because sharing the C enjoy with others can makes me happy and I hope they will also feel happier and. Understand my emotion with this, with the.

✓ I want to sing for someone who appreciates me because sharing the joy with others makes me happy, and I hope they will also feel happier and understand my emotions through this.

'someone who appreciate'中的'appreciate'应为第三人称单数'appreciates'。'my same'应为'me'。'sharing the C enjoy'应为'sharing the joy'。'can makes'应为'makes'。句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× Yeah, I agree with you. Sing can bring happiness with people. That is why I love to see and see with others. For example 1. I feel very awful and very sad. I like to mention this is some music with a lot of. No. Which can make me happy.

✓ Yeah, I agree with you. Singing can bring happiness to people. That is why I love to sing and sing with others. For example, when I feel very awful and sad, I like to listen to some music with a lot of energy, which can make me happy.

'Sing'应为动名词形式'singing'。'bring happiness with people'应为'bring happiness to people'。'love to see and see'应为'love to sing and sing'。句子不完整，需补充完整表达。