Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如'seeing'应为'singing'，'becauses'应为'because'。建议注意时态一致性和单词拼写，同时回答应更简洁自然，避免冗长。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. When I was a child, I often attended music lessons, which helped me reduce stress from subjects like math and English.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如'helped me a company with my thing'不明确。建议使用清晰的句子结构，注意时态一致，并避免无意义的重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned to sing Chinese traditional songs during music lessons as a child. Later, I also learned to play the guitar, which made singing more enjoyable. I like singing along with my favorite songs on Apple Music.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如'an act as the guitar player'应为'acting as the guitar player'，'be 'cause I am really appreciate for them'表达不自然。建议简化句子，注意语法和表达的准确性。

Ví dụ: After joining the school band as a guitar player, I would like to perform at school concerts. I want to sing and play the guitar for the audience to show my appreciation for their support.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次重复'thing'，表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议使用具体词汇替代'thing'，并简洁明了地表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it expresses genuine emotions. It is also a great way for people to relieve stress.

× Yes, I like seeing because it will make me feel relaxed when I heard songs and when I was a child I always attend the music lessons becauses it can help me to reduce the pressure on any math or English classes.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me feel relaxed when I hear songs, and when I was a child I always attended music lessons because they helped me reduce the pressure from math or English classes.

这里的动词应该用动名词形式表示喜欢的动作，'seeing'应改为'singing'。另外，时态要保持一致，'heard'应改为现在时'here'，'attend'应改为过去时'attended'，'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。此外，'it can help me to reduce'改为'they helped me reduce'更符合语境。

× Yes, when I was a child I learned how to sing Chinese traditional songs during the music lessons and after that I also learn to play the guitar which helped me a company with my thing in more easily.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I learned how to sing Chinese traditional songs during music lessons, and after that I also learned to play the guitar, which helped me accompany my singing more easily.

时态不一致，'learn'应改为过去式'learned'。'helped me a company with my thing'表达错误，应为'helped me accompany my singing'。

× I enjoy using Apple Music to sing with my favorite sounds because it makes it can make.

✓ I enjoy using Apple Music to sing with my favorite songs because it makes me happy.

句子结构混乱，'makes it can make'不正确，应简化为'makes me happy'。

× After I joined the school band an act as the guitar player, I'd like to help a concert in the school and I'd like to sing and play the guitar for all the audience be 'cause I am really appreciate for them to support me.

✓ After I joined the school band and acted as the guitar player, I'd like to help organize a concert at school and sing and play the guitar for all the audience because I really appreciate their support.

句子结构混乱，'an act'应为'and acted'，'help a concert'应为'help organize a concert'，'be 'cause'应为'because'，'I am really appreciate for them'应为'I really appreciate their support'。

× Yes, I believe that thing can bring happiness to people becaused it is universally acknowledged that the thing the thing can reflect the original and rudimentary emotions to people.

✓ Yes, I believe that singing can bring happiness to people because it is universally acknowledged that singing can reflect original and rudimentary emotions to people.

'becaused'拼写错误，应为'because'。'the thing the thing'重复且不明确，应改为'singing'。介词使用不当，'reflect emotions to people'应为'reflect emotions in people'或直接省略介词。

× It is a way that people can relieve their stress.

✓ It is a way for people to relieve their stress.

'that'引导的定语从句不合适，应该用'for'引导不定式短语，表达目的。