Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like seeing because I think we nice singing a song. I can have a cozy feeling and it makes me feel confident and I were I am good at singing a song.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I. Don't learn how to I've. Don't I don't have run to how to think because I just singing a song in my spare time and I just very love it and just love.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing for myself because I think I'm a brave and smart girl. I always kind to everyone and I always work hard for the good results that I want to get. And I always I always be friendly to my friends and help them to overcome some problems.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think singing can bring happiness and. Meaning. Two people be 'cause people. Well be moved by singing a Psalm. If you can sing well, you can make people being booed or.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当,表达不够自然和连贯。建议加强基本语法练习,避免重复和冗余,使用更准确的词汇表达感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it gives me a cozy feeling and boosts my confidence. I enjoy singing songs as it makes me feel happy and relaxed.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答语句不完整且混乱,缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议练习完整句子表达,理清思路,使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. I just enjoy singing songs in my spare time because I love it very much.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容偏离主题,缺少对“为谁唱歌”的直接回答。建议直接回答问题,并用具体细节支持观点,避免无关信息。
Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. Singing for them makes me feel happy and appreciated.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清,语法和词汇错误较多,影响理解。建议简洁明了地表达观点,使用恰当的词汇和句型。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it can move their emotions. When someone sings well, it can inspire and cheer others up.
× Yes, I like seeing because I think we nice singing a song.
✓ Yes, I like singing because I think we enjoy singing a song.
这里'seeing'应为'singing',因为表达喜欢唱歌,动词应使用动名词形式。
× I can have a cozy feeling and it makes me feel confident and I were I am good at singing a song.
✓ I can have a cozy feeling, and it makes me feel confident because I am good at singing a song.
句子结构混乱,'I were I am'不合语法,应改为'because I am',使句子通顺。
× No, I. Don't learn how to I've. Don't I don't have run to how to think because I just singing a song in my spare time and I just very love it and just love.
✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing. I don't think I need to because I just sing songs in my spare time and I really love it.
时态错误,'Don't learn'应为现在完成时'haven't learned',且句子不完整,需调整使表达清晰。
× I want to sing for myself because I think I'm a brave and smart girl.
✓ I want to sing for myself because I think I am a brave and smart girl.
缩写形式'I'm'在口语中正确,但书面表达中建议使用完整形式'I am',更正式。
× I always kind to everyone and I always work hard for the good results that I want to get.
✓ I am always kind to everyone and I always work hard to get the good results that I want.
'always kind'缺少系动词'am','work hard for'应改为'work hard to get',使表达更准确。
× And I always I always be friendly to my friends and help them to overcome some problems.
✓ And I am always friendly to my friends and help them overcome some problems.
'I always be'时态错误,应为'I am always',且'help them to overcome'中'to'可省略。
× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness and. Meaning. Two people be 'cause people. Well be moved by singing a Psalm.
✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness and meaning to people because people can be moved by singing a song well.
句子断裂且不连贯,需合并并调整词序,使句子完整且通顺。
× If you can sing well, you can make people being booed or.
✓ If you can sing well, you can make people feel moved or happy.
'make people being booed'表达错误,'booed'意为被嘘,应改为'make people feel moved or happy',表达正确情感。