Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengucapan yang mengganggu pemahaman. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih alami dan menghindari pengulangan kata seperti 'singing abilities'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas.

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing, especially in front of others, because I feel shy and I don't think I have a good voice. I prefer listening to music rather than singing myself.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan terdapat pengulangan serta kesalahan tata bahasa. Cobalah untuk menjawab dengan kalimat yang lebih teratur dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide. Hindari pengulangan kata yang sama.

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing. I have only learned to play musical instruments, and since I lack confidence in my singing abilities, I haven't tried to learn singing.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan sulit dipahami karena banyak kesalahan pengucapan dan kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk menjawab dengan kalimat yang jelas dan terstruktur, serta gunakan kosa kata yang tepat untuk menjelaskan situasi.

Ví dụ: I like to sing with my friends, especially during quiet evenings or karaoke nights. Singing together helps us relax and enjoy each other's company.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan relevan, namun ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kalimat yang kurang lancar. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan menghubungkan ide dengan lebih baik menggunakan linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feelings. Moreover, singing is a great way to relieve stress. For example, many people feel joyful and uplifted when they sing their favorite songs, either alone or with others.

× I don't like singing, especially singing in front of others because I don't have singing abilities an I feel shy to perform in front of. People.

✓ I don't like singing, especially singing in front of others because I don't have singing abilities and I feel shy to perform in front of people.

There is an incorrect use of the preposition 'an' instead of 'and', and an unnecessary period after 'front of'. The correct conjunction 'and' should be used to connect the clauses, and the period should be removed to maintain sentence flow.

× So I prefer to listen music instead of singing.

✓ So I prefer to listen to music instead of singing.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object. Omitting 'to' is a common prepositional error.

× No, I don't. I haven't learned anything about singing and I just I just learned instruments an.

✓ No, I haven't. I haven't learned anything about singing and I just learned instruments.

The pronoun 'don't' is incorrectly used instead of 'haven't' to respond to a question about past experience. Also, 'an' is an incorrect article here and should be removed. Repetition of 'I just' is redundant and corrected.

× I just learned instruments an.

✓ I just learned instruments.

The article 'an' is incorrectly used after 'instruments' which is plural and does not require an article here.

× I don't have abilities for singing so. I'm not confident. I don't have abilities to sing.

✓ I don't have the ability to sing, so I'm not confident.

The plural 'abilities' is awkward here; 'ability' in singular is more appropriate. Also, the sentence is fragmented and can be combined for clarity.

× I like to sing with my friends. Uh, especially in quit correcting nights. Karaoke nights.

✓ I like to sing with my friends, especially on quiet karaoke nights.

The phrase 'quit correcting nights' is incorrect and unclear; it seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'quiet karaoke nights'. Also, 'on' is the correct preposition for days or nights.

× Up. Will you sing to get her things? Sing a song, Anne. Anne genuinely day credit eyes me an improv. I mean they asking improvement.

✓ We sing together. Singing songs genuinely helps me improve. I mean, they ask for improvement.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. They have been restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness, correcting sentence fragments and unclear phrases.

× Singing allows individuals expressing their emotions and feelings and great way to relieve stress.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and feelings and is a great way to relieve stress.

The verb 'allows' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to express' not the gerund 'expressing'. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'a great way'.