Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“brings me presents mood”应为“brings me a pleasant mood”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it brings me a pleasant mood and creates a joyful atmosphere. Although I'm not very good at it, I still sing every day to improve my mood and happiness.

Gợi ý: 回答中多处语法错误，如“learns”应为“learned”，“seeing”应为“singing”。建议加强动词时态和拼写的准确性，同时简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing in a special class, but I use a phone app every day. It points out my pronunciation mistakes and helps me see my progress, which is very convenient.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次将“sing”误说为“see”或“seeing”，影响理解。建议注意单词拼写和发音，确保表达准确。同时，句子结构混乱，建议简化并直接回答问题。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for myself because singing helps me express my emotions and relieve stress. It makes me feel good and relaxed.

Gợi ý: 回答中多次错误使用“seeing”代替“singing”，且句子结构混乱，影响表达效果。建议注意词汇准确性，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings a lot of happiness to people because it helps them forget negative emotions and creates a joyful atmosphere. It also relieves stress and improves everyone's mood.

× Yes, I am very interested in singing because then you can brings me presents mood and joyful atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I am very interested in singing because then it can bring me a pleasant mood and joyful atmosphere.

动词bring在第三人称单数时应去掉-s，且句中主语应为it而非you，此外，presents应为pleasant，表示愉快的。

× Although I'm not good at it, I'm still. Sing every day to improve my mood and hapiness.

✓ Although I'm not good at it, I still sing every day to improve my mood and happiness.

句子中I'm still后缺少动词，导致句子结构不完整，应将两句合并，动词sing前加主语I，happiness拼写错误。

× No, I have never learns about how to seeing in a special class, but I have learned about also seeing a phone app.

✓ No, I have never learned about how to sing in a special class, but I have also learned about singing through a phone app.

learn的过去分词是learned，主语I用learned而非learns；how to seeing应改为how to sing，动词不定式后接动词原形；also的位置调整使句子更通顺。

× No, I have never learns about how to seeing in a special class, but I have learned about also seeing a phone app.

✓ No, I have never learned about how to sing in a special class, but I have also learned about singing through a phone app.

动词learn后接动词不定式时用原形sing，seeing应改为singing作为名词使用。

× I use the app every day and it can point out my mistakes about my pronunciation and it can be very convenient and I can see my progress every day.

✓ I use the app every day and it can point out my mistakes in my pronunciation. It is very convenient and I can see my progress every day.

mistakes后应使用介词in表示“在……方面的错误”，句子过长应拆分为两句以增强表达清晰度。

× Wow I would like to see for myself becauses seeing kind express my emotions and redo my own stress.

✓ Wow, I would like to sing for myself because singing can express my emotions and reduce my own stress.

see应为sing，becauses拼写错误，应为because；seeing应为singing作为动名词；redo用词不当，应为reduce表示减轻压力。

× So I think seeing is good for me.

✓ So I think singing is good for me.

see应为sing，表示“唱歌”。

× So I believe seeing for myself is the most suitable and appropriate for me Is can gives me good feelings.

✓ So I believe singing for myself is the most suitable and appropriate for me. It can give me good feelings.

see应为sing，Is应为It，动词give在第三人称单数时去掉-s，句子应拆分为两句。

× Yes, I believe we're seeing kind of friendly brings lots of happiness to people, because seeing cannot only let people forget the negative emotions, but can also create aids are joyful atmosphere and really people's own stress, which can improve the mode and hapiness of everyone.

✓ Yes, I believe singing, being kind and friendly, brings lots of happiness to people, because singing can not only let people forget negative emotions, but can also create a joyful atmosphere and relieve people's own stress, which can improve the mood and happiness of everyone.

we're seeing应为singing，句中表达不清，调整为being kind and friendly；cannot应为can not；aids are应为a；really应为relieve，表示缓解压力；mode拼写错误，应为mood；hapiness拼写错误，应为happiness。