Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, 'I usually saying' should be 'I usually sing'. Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I love singing even though I have never had professional training. I sing whenever I feel happy or sad, and my favorite place to practice is the bathroom because the acoustics are great there.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats some ideas from the previous question and has some unclear phrases like 'I think both whenever I'm happy or sad'. Try to avoid repetition and make your sentences clearer. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: I haven't received any professional singing lessons, but I enjoy singing a lot. I usually sing when I feel happy or sad because it helps me relax. Also, I like practicing in the bathroom since the acoustics there are excellent.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. For example, 'I want to sing for I usually sing for my son' is unclear. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I usually sing for my son every night to help him fall asleep because it creates a calm atmosphere. Besides that, I sometimes sing for myself as it helps me relax and forget negative thoughts. Singing is a great way for me to unwind after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but ends abruptly and has some repetition. Try to finish your sentences completely and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I believe singing and music have the power to uplift our mood and help us feel relaxed, whether during celebrations or difficult times. Moreover, music can make us feel more connected with others, which brings happiness to many people.

× I usually saying whenever I'm happy or sad.

✓ I usually sing whenever I'm happy or sad.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used in the '-ing' form here. The correct form is the base verb 'sing' to match the present simple tense used for habitual actions.

× And my favorite place to practice is the bathroom because the acoustic is great.

✓ And my favorite place to practice is the bathroom because the acoustics are great.

The word 'acoustic' is a noun here and should be plural 'acoustics' to refer to the sound qualities of the bathroom. Also, 'acoustics' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'.

× And my favorite place to practice is in the bathroom because you know the acoustics are great there.

✓ And my favorite place to practice is the bathroom because you know the acoustics are great there.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here; 'is the bathroom' is the correct phrase to indicate the place.

× I want to sing for I usually sing for my son every night when I tried to help you fall asleep because it suits a man, creates a calm atmosphere.

✓ I want to sing for my son. I usually sing for him every night when I try to help him fall asleep because it soothes him and creates a calm atmosphere.

The original sentence is a run-on and contains pronoun errors. It needs to be split into clear sentences with correct pronouns and verb tenses. 'Tried' should be 'try' to match present habitual action. 'You' should be 'him' to refer to the son. 'Suits a man' is unclear and corrected to 'soothes him' for clarity.

× Besides that I also saying for myself sometimes as it helps me relax and distracts me from any negative thoughts.

✓ Besides that, I also sing for myself sometimes as it helps me relax and distracts me from any negative thoughts.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used in the '-ing' form. The correct base verb 'sing' should be used to indicate the action.

× I believe singing and music has the power to uplift our mood and also help us feel relaxed, for example, in celebration or even in difficult times.

✓ I believe singing and music have the power to uplift our mood and also help us feel relaxed, for example, in celebration or even in difficult times.

The subject 'singing and music' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has' to agree in number.

× So yeah, music truly has the power to change how we feel and.

✓ So yeah, music truly has the power to change how we feel.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.